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Reality?
Contributed by
redtempest13
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 01:59:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Alone in the dark,
With no one around,
There's no one to scream for,
They won't hear a sound.
The ledge is high,
The pit is deep,
There's no way to know,
What my prison will keep.
Eternal slumber,
It's what I need,
A final rest,
Come swift with speed.
My will is weak,
My body sore,
I can't get out,
There is no door.
My mind is closing,
And me within,
It's way too strong,
I cannot win.
I can't escape,
Yet I have no choice,
I scream inside,
I have no voice.
My body's numbing,
I have to fight,
I cannot see,
I've lost my sight.
My legs won't move,
My eyes are heavy,
I can't go yet,
I'm just not ready!
Please get me out!
I scream in my head,
I've changed my mind,
I don't want to be dead!
But another swift blow,
And I find I can't hear,
And all I can smell,
Is the stench of my fear.
The darkness keeps coming,
To swallow me whole,
I have to fight back!
It can't have my soul!
Then my hope flees,
And I can't even scream,
And then I wake up,
It was all just a dream . . .
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Re: Reality?
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:02:50 PM AEST
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Intriguing. I like the twist at the end.
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Re: Reality?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 02:04:27 PM AEST
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| I found this interesting and the rhythm of it carries one along. The ending was perfect! Cheers! |
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