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You've Won
Contributed by
upomik
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Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:14:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There's not much more that you can do
To take my dreams away
Because I'm now down to my last
And I have no strength to pray
You've taken my will
So I cannot stand
And I've fogotten the image
Of a helping hand
So whatever else you want of mine it's yours
Obviously, you've gone through a lot to get it
You don't have to bring me down anymore...you've won
Don't you see? Leave me alone now and forget it
Copyright ©
upomik
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2005-02-02 19:14:38]
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Re: You've Won
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:24:07 PM AEST
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| You feel sad because of no music..Good to know the world is in such great order that this is what ppl care about |
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Re: You've Won
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 10:34:39 PM AEST
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