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Array ( [sid] => 82779 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TILL DEATH DO WE PART, by Larry Lile [time] => 2005-02-03 06:07:49 [hometext] => love can die! when abused [bodytext] => Five short years ago, she thought i'd hung, the moon up there in the sky.
But this morning, my baby left me, she got tired of all my lie's!
What a sad sight to behold, when true love, is slowley, put to death.
and this morning, my baby's love for me, i finaly, laid to rest!

Till death do we part, we vowed there that day.
I kept breaking her heart, untill she went away.
Till death do we part, her love died here today.
now it's breaking my heart, but now it's to late.

She stayed at home, with our son, and did the best, that she could do.
While I ran around, all over town, acting like a fool.
All the love, I would ever need, was waiting for me at home.
But all the love, she had for me, I let wither, now its gone!

Till death do we part, we vowed there that day
I kept breaking her heart, untill she went away
Till death do we part, her love died here today.
and now its breaking my heart, but now is to late! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 22 [informant] => potlicker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

TILL DEATH DO WE PART, by Larry Lile

Contributed by potlicker on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 06:07:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Five short years ago, she thought i'd hung, the moon up there in the sky.
But this morning, my baby left me, she got tired of all my lie's!
What a sad sight to behold, when true love, is slowley, put to death.
and this morning, my baby's love for me, i finaly, laid to rest!

Till death do we part, we vowed there that day.
I kept breaking her heart, untill she went away.
Till death do we part, her love died here today.
now it's breaking my heart, but now it's to late.

She stayed at home, with our son, and did the best, that she could do.
While I ran around, all over town, acting like a fool.
All the love, I would ever need, was waiting for me at home.
But all the love, she had for me, I let wither, now its gone!

Till death do we part, we vowed there that day
I kept breaking her heart, untill she went away
Till death do we part, her love died here today.
and now its breaking my heart, but now is to late!

Copyright © potlicker ... [ 2005-02-03 06:07:49]
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Re: TILL DEATH DO WE PART, by Larry Lile (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 02:47:36 PM AEST
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very sad.......... wishing you well:) hugs n' love nessa

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