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Array ( [sid] => 82957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A murder in this World [time] => 2005-02-04 10:45:16 [hometext] => enjoy,its about a true story that happened in the early 1900's,not sure where [bodytext] => Trapped in a dark corner
fearing lifes almost over
scared cuz that light will never again exsist
you're thinking back to a time when blood stains were on your wrist

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

four guys all around
the lil girl crying in pain on the ground

four guys laughing and carrying away
this day is the last day
of this poor innocents girls life
with the use of a sharp knife

The family gets the news weeks later
the mother cries sad tears for her daughter
the father stands there stairing blankly at the mother
they blame eachother,it was all the father

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

all the greed
too much indeed
the taken of a life of another
why must it be over

After death
cone back
haunt their every breath
cuz you know they lack

Be their nightmares
hide in their closets
Be more then unfare
Kill them when they get desperate

Make their lifes terrible
cuz they'll always be ungreatful
make them understand
all your pain,tell them your plan

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

It's more then murder
A father plans the death of his daughter
he wants her dead,and shes just a kid
he wants her dead cuz if what he did

He got drunk and raped her
he beat her
he scared her
all the time,he killed her

He wasn't man enough
to not do it
so now is daughter is a dead misfit
he made her life way to tough

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

murder (x2)
A murder in this world

The taken
The achen
The starving
The world of nothing [comments] => 3 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 34 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
A murder in this World

Contributed by savedbydeath on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:45:16 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Trapped in a dark corner
fearing lifes almost over
scared cuz that light will never again exsist
you're thinking back to a time when blood stains were on your wrist

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

four guys all around
the lil girl crying in pain on the ground

four guys laughing and carrying away
this day is the last day
of this poor innocents girls life
with the use of a sharp knife

The family gets the news weeks later
the mother cries sad tears for her daughter
the father stands there stairing blankly at the mother
they blame eachother,it was all the father

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

all the greed
too much indeed
the taken of a life of another
why must it be over

After death
cone back
haunt their every breath
cuz you know they lack

Be their nightmares
hide in their closets
Be more then unfare
Kill them when they get desperate

Make their lifes terrible
cuz they'll always be ungreatful
make them understand
all your pain,tell them your plan

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

It's more then murder
A father plans the death of his daughter
he wants her dead,and shes just a kid
he wants her dead cuz if what he did

He got drunk and raped her
he beat her
he scared her
all the time,he killed her

He wasn't man enough
to not do it
so now is daughter is a dead misfit
he made her life way to tough

(chorus)
A murder in this world
the murder of a young girl
so young so beautiful
she was so special
stabbed 21 times
theres way to many crimes
and no concequences
just a slap on the wrists
a murder in this world

murder (x2)
A murder in this world

The taken
The achen
The starving
The world of nothing




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Re: A murder in this World (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 12:02:08 PM AEST
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very good, i like it....


Re: A murder in this World (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:50:02 PM AEST
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Good long write nice job


Re: A murder in this World (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:50:42 PM AEST
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sad to know that there are people out there who are out there willing to cover their tracks by making it worst,good write,love ya




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