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Array ( [sid] => 82981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Reflection [time] => 2005-02-04 15:21:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I stand
the hypitome
of beautty
true vitality pure
long brown faded reddening
strands
telling a tale of mortality
carmel touched flesh radiating
sun goddess
pussy-plump native clay smeared
lips
supple broadened breasts
silver rings through hardened nipples
soft tan like desert sand
rounded
the hills of This woman's hips
legs long as her lives
sexual structure
fluctuating features and limbs
think of ever, present, always, and never
this doesn't even scrape the surface
of her eyes
hypitome of
beauty
hypitome of
sexuality
hypitome of
mortality and spirituality
admiring from afar
in the mirror
This reflection is hardly
the Tao
of Her [comments] => 1 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 62 [informant] => entiti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

Reflection

Contributed by entiti on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 03:21:43 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

I stand
the hypitome
of beautty
true vitality pure
long brown faded reddening
strands
telling a tale of mortality
carmel touched flesh radiating
sun goddess
pussy-plump native clay smeared
lips
supple broadened breasts
silver rings through hardened nipples
soft tan like desert sand
rounded
the hills of This woman's hips
legs long as her lives
sexual structure
fluctuating features and limbs
think of ever, present, always, and never
this doesn't even scrape the surface
of her eyes
hypitome of
beauty
hypitome of
sexuality
hypitome of
mortality and spirituality
admiring from afar
in the mirror
This reflection is hardly
the Tao
of Her

Copyright © entiti ... [ 2005-02-04 15:21:43]
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Re: Reflection (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:12:08 AM AEST
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Interesting analysis of the surface persona vs the inner self, or the subject as object. She is more than the totality of her features, no matter how attactive- hence the Tao reference. Maybe you could do a companion piece - Inner Look.

This is a slow, semi-staccato read - I like the "hyp" sensibility, and there is a lot of confidence and self-assurance in it.

Its peculiar that people are reading this piece but not commenting. They must be all voyeurs and no critics.

Spike

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