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Array ( [sid] => 83031 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beautiful Rose [time] => 2005-02-04 21:53:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Beautiful Rose
Glistening
In the rain
With the sun
Piercing through
The clouds
You keep me
Guessing

Beautiful Rose
I will never
Be able to touch,
The storm you
Have brewed
To keep me at bay...
Is to much

Beautiful Rose
With razor sharp
Thorns
To you my beauty
That wont let me
Hold
Will you accept
My love
To which I pledge
To never
Run cold

Beautiful Rose
You
I will never
Hold

Brewing Storm
My heart which
You have
Torn

Wilting pedals
Killing
The love
I wished to
Grow

Beautiful Rose
To which
My love
You will never
Know [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 48 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Beautiful Rose

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 09:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Beautiful Rose
Glistening
In the rain
With the sun
Piercing through
The clouds
You keep me
Guessing

Beautiful Rose
I will never
Be able to touch,
The storm you
Have brewed
To keep me at bay...
Is to much

Beautiful Rose
With razor sharp
Thorns
To you my beauty
That wont let me
Hold
Will you accept
My love
To which I pledge
To never
Run cold

Beautiful Rose
You
I will never
Hold

Brewing Storm
My heart which
You have
Torn

Wilting pedals
Killing
The love
I wished to
Grow

Beautiful Rose
To which
My love
You will never
Know




Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-04 21:53:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Beautiful Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by cherrycoke on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 10:23:35 PM AEST
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great poem .. i like how you personified the rose .. you've definitely got talent .. keep writing


Re: Beautiful Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:39:52 AM AEST
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absolutely gorgeous, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Beautiful Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 10:00:20 PM AEST
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you wrote of a beautiful rose, and what you have is an amazingly beautiful poem. i cant express my liking for this one, its too great for words to express.




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