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Array ( [sid] => 83145 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll Give Up Forever [time] => 2005-02-05 20:34:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'll give up forever just to touch you
and to hold you in my arms all night
because having forever without you
is like having a day without light.
I'm sure when you walk outside
the birds sing and the flowers bloom to,
because seeing your face is like sunshine
and nothing can compare to you.
When I look into your eyes I see
an angel that fell from above.
When I see that smile upon your face,
I know that I'm deep in love.
You're like the sun filling my world with light.
You're like a star that I can't touch.
So I'll continue to gaze upon you
because I love you just that much.
Leaves change from green to brown.
The sky changes from black to blue.
But one thing that will never change
is the love I have for you.
I'll give up forever just to kiss you
and to make love with you all night
because having forever without you
is like having a day without light. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Kachina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I'll Give Up Forever

Contributed by Kachina on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 08:34:15 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I'll give up forever just to touch you
and to hold you in my arms all night
because having forever without you
is like having a day without light.
I'm sure when you walk outside
the birds sing and the flowers bloom to,
because seeing your face is like sunshine
and nothing can compare to you.
When I look into your eyes I see
an angel that fell from above.
When I see that smile upon your face,
I know that I'm deep in love.
You're like the sun filling my world with light.
You're like a star that I can't touch.
So I'll continue to gaze upon you
because I love you just that much.
Leaves change from green to brown.
The sky changes from black to blue.
But one thing that will never change
is the love I have for you.
I'll give up forever just to kiss you
and to make love with you all night
because having forever without you
is like having a day without light.

Copyright © Kachina ... [ 2005-02-05 20:34:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'll Give Up Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 11:11:37 PM AEST
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wonderful job, i loved it! it really reminded me of a goo goo dolls song for some reason, anyway excellent write, keep it up :)

Curtis

Re: I'll Give Up Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:16:50 AM AEST
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similar in ways to 'iris' by the goo goo dolls but different in other ways. nice

Re: I'll Give Up Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Bexstasy on Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 02:17:36 PM AEST
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I really adore this poem. It's great.

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