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Array ( [sid] => 83260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => See the Beauty [time] => 2005-02-06 19:26:40 [hometext] => This is my first poem that really isn't dark or emotional or anything like that. It's kinda funny, kinda sarcastic, but mainly on life. [bodytext] => The smell of a daisy.
The sound of the birds.
The touch of a cat's fur.
The taste of melting chocolate in
the summer sun.

Oh isn't that just lovely....
If only life was truly like that...
We spend our lives saying "If only..." and "I wish...."
But have you ever looked at what you already have?
We remember life's worsts more than life's bests.

Look out your window, yes right now....
Recognize the beauty of nature
Okay, if your window is covered with snow,
then just enjoy the beauty of snow's......umm.....
wetness...and its......whitenes...

Okay so life isn't always beautiful, but you already knew that. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 21 [informant] => vanilla_flame [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

See the Beauty

Contributed by vanilla_flame on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 07:26:40 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The smell of a daisy.
The sound of the birds.
The touch of a cat's fur.
The taste of melting chocolate in
the summer sun.

Oh isn't that just lovely....
If only life was truly like that...
We spend our lives saying "If only..." and "I wish...."
But have you ever looked at what you already have?
We remember life's worsts more than life's bests.

Look out your window, yes right now....
Recognize the beauty of nature
Okay, if your window is covered with snow,
then just enjoy the beauty of snow's......umm.....
wetness...and its......whitenes...

Okay so life isn't always beautiful, but you already knew that.

Copyright © vanilla_flame ... [ 2005-02-06 19:26:40]
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Re: See the Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:58:12 PM AEST
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so true...good write...hope you write more like this one...Shari

Re: See the Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:33:57 PM AEST
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life is not always beautiful but there is enough beauty we only have ourselves to blame if we dont see it
well written

Re: See the Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 06:39:02 PM AEST
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i was gonna write a poem that had the same meaning but yours is way better.
this is a good poem

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