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Array ( [sid] => 83269 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Laid to Rest [time] => 2005-02-06 20:26:08 [hometext] => A late night write last night... [bodytext] => Expected to take a test without questions
Paying the price for regrets of tomarrow
But nothing but weakend expectations
And the after birth of sarrow

Deep and
Dark seated
Soul

Left and
Lost forever
No one
Knows

Dreams lost forever, in a glance
Greaving the pain of lost love
Driven through you're heart, a bloody glass
And the blood raining from above

You've had enough...

Cold and
Currupted
Open ended
Lives

Empty and
Endlessly
Bleeding
Lies

Choosing to throw the game
Out of rage, you did'nt want to play
You wanted to fail
Because you're life was'nt the same
You're life
Was living
Hell

Laid to Rest
so you could'nt hear
everybody
Yell

Laid to Rest
Cold
Empty
And pail

A family...
One face less

As the casket
Lowered deep
into the ground
Nothing of you
But memories left

As you were
Laid
To
Rest

They finally
Confess
Their love

Something you
Never felt
Enough of...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Laid to Rest

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 08:26:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Expected to take a test without questions
Paying the price for regrets of tomarrow
But nothing but weakend expectations
And the after birth of sarrow

Deep and
Dark seated
Soul

Left and
Lost forever
No one
Knows

Dreams lost forever, in a glance
Greaving the pain of lost love
Driven through you're heart, a bloody glass
And the blood raining from above

You've had enough...

Cold and
Currupted
Open ended
Lives

Empty and
Endlessly
Bleeding
Lies

Choosing to throw the game
Out of rage, you did'nt want to play
You wanted to fail
Because you're life was'nt the same
You're life
Was living
Hell

Laid to Rest
so you could'nt hear
everybody
Yell

Laid to Rest
Cold
Empty
And pail

A family...
One face less

As the casket
Lowered deep
into the ground
Nothing of you
But memories left

As you were
Laid
To
Rest

They finally
Confess
Their love

Something you
Never felt
Enough of...





Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-06 20:26:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Laid to Rest (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:11:19 PM AEST
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Each person has their own poetic words to say good one my friend. Keep them coming.


Re: Laid to Rest (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 09:52:52 PM AEST
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brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. =]


Re: Laid to Rest (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:00:20 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A SONG SO SAD ABOUT ALL THE WRONG ONE PERSON HAD!MAKES YOU THINK ABOUT ALL THAT GOES TO WASTE BEFORE A BODY IS SOON TO SINK!!
GREAT WRITE WITH A SPECIAL KIND OF MEANING TO IT!!!

DAN!!!!




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