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You entrance my heart's rhythm
And quicken the rate of my breathing
With each step as you're nearing

I can't run away fast enough
To escape your twisted love

Consciousness rapes me
With unattainable dreams
And I'm raped till I bleed
With conscious need

And pain
Makes black fade
To gray

As consciousness rapes me
With what will never be
But a misery [comments] => 10 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Rape the Innocent

Contributed by essentially9 on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Rape the Innocent

You entrance my heart's rhythm
And quicken the rate of my breathing
With each step as you're nearing

I can't run away fast enough
To escape your twisted love

Consciousness rapes me
With unattainable dreams
And I'm raped till I bleed
With conscious need

And pain
Makes black fade
To gray

As consciousness rapes me
With what will never be
But a misery

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Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 6th February 2005 @ 11:04:54 PM AEST
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"You entrance my heart's rhythm
And quicken the rate of my breathing
With each step as you're nearing"

I really felt that part Jinnifer
Great write..

Clark

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:05:47 AM AEST
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This tore threw me without mercy. Geez... it's a powerful piece. I paused a bit at the repeating of "consciousness rapes me" in the last stanza... I do like the statement (very much), but think something is lost with its repetition. Maybe "As it overtakes me" or something similar might be a viable alternative? Dunno... just a thought.

This is (and remains regardless of my prodding) a potent write. Well done, E!

Hoping you don't mind my rambling,
~SNM~

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 04:11:31 AM AEST
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Such is the misery.a powerful expression. shows a bleeding heart.:-) venkat

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:27:58 AM AEST
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As consciousness rapes me
With what will never be
But a misery

Very good last stanza,this is powerful to no end..But then again you alreasdy knew this right..

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:28:40 AM AEST
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Wow my god Jennifer that was just bloody brilliant. What an terrific write i really enjoyed your poetic skills.
Nice poem as always.

Jane x

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 11:15:51 AM AEST
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Deep words and excellently written poem.

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 12:23:25 PM AEST
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powerful and dark, a great write,
pix xx

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by noone on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:19:09 PM AEST
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Good work. You have truly captured the moment. You have great talent, keep writing.

Noone

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 07:12:51 PM AEST
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Not bad - I'm not a huge fan of the first stanza part but the last one
was very very good. Nice job!

~waos/kara

Re: Rape the Innocent (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 11:56:04 PM AEST
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Starts off strong and stays strong until the very end. Excellent write!

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