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Array ( [sid] => 8331 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Painful Beauty [time] => 2002-12-10 05:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => These feelings hit me in such a rush
i was spun in a daze of teh sweetest blues and tangled reds.
my mind is floating away from me;
and my body is in no hurry to catch up.
images of your skin dance in my mind,
only to make life more insane
purple turns to green as the crystal blue of your eyes capture teh space between me an you.
Teasing sensations of skin upon skin tickle my very bone.
The madness is too much and so i close my eyes to excape the beauty or your body.
but in my dreams you still hold me as tight as before.
no breath can reach my lips but do not lighten your grasp.
for i would rather loose myself in you then take another breath without you there to breath it in. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => DannyZucko [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Painful Beauty

Contributed by DannyZucko on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



These feelings hit me in such a rush
i was spun in a daze of teh sweetest blues and tangled reds.
my mind is floating away from me;
and my body is in no hurry to catch up.
images of your skin dance in my mind,
only to make life more insane
purple turns to green as the crystal blue of your eyes capture teh space between me an you.
Teasing sensations of skin upon skin tickle my very bone.
The madness is too much and so i close my eyes to excape the beauty or your body.
but in my dreams you still hold me as tight as before.
no breath can reach my lips but do not lighten your grasp.
for i would rather loose myself in you then take another breath without you there to breath it in.




Copyright © DannyZucko ... [ 2002-12-10 05:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Painful Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 12:53:40 PM AEST
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beauty is in the eye of the beholder so it is said, just keep in mind that beauty lies just beyond a person's body. nice write! kudos! ;0) -daniel




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