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Array ( [sid] => 8341 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Abandoned [time] => 2002-12-10 10:00:00 [hometext] => Ive felt this way alot of times. As if I am completely lost and alone in this world and no one wants me. Please enjoy my poetry. [bodytext] => I walk alone through the empty streets,
of a world that I once did belong,
but thinking that I could always fit in,
was something that I thought wrong.

I once believed that there was hope,
but that hope has abandoned my heart,
for I lost all that I ever cherished,
as my world starting crumbling apart.

I remember a time when I could laugh,
when I could even smile,
but a tear sits on my cheek,
from depression that ive felt for awhile.

So leave me be,
as the rest of this cold world has done,
im lost, alone, betrayed, and hurt,
I do not want anyone.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Chanti [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Abandoned

Contributed by Chanti on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I walk alone through the empty streets,
of a world that I once did belong,
but thinking that I could always fit in,
was something that I thought wrong.

I once believed that there was hope,
but that hope has abandoned my heart,
for I lost all that I ever cherished,
as my world starting crumbling apart.

I remember a time when I could laugh,
when I could even smile,
but a tear sits on my cheek,
from depression that ive felt for awhile.

So leave me be,
as the rest of this cold world has done,
im lost, alone, betrayed, and hurt,
I do not want anyone.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2002-12-10 10:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Abandoned (User Rating: 1 )
by Dot on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 10:39:05 AM AEST
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Hi Chanti, I hope someone in your world listens to you. I'm sorry you have such sad feelings. I'll listen to you, dear one. Dot

Re: Abandoned (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 12:30:29 PM AEST
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paradoxial thoughts here you have: you "do not want anyone" yet you want people to enjoy yur poetry... being abandoned comes again and again at the worst of times. but know that yur not alone, there are others feeling just the same. pray you find those people you will know be dear to your heart someday. kudos! ;0)

Re: Abandoned (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 12:58:32 PM AEST
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Hey, Chanti this is very powerful I love the feeling and heartache you put into this one. If you need to talk... I'm here send me an e-mail fartingson@hotmail.com. Keep writing these.

-Bobo (Joel)

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