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In verse, in rhyme, in tone
But cannot for the life of me
Find a “voice” I own

In aiming for simplicity
My verse is short and blunt
Need have I to triumph fear
And plural syllables confront

And yea, when darkness overtakes
My ruminating mind
It corresponds with best ideas
I’ve searched all day to find

Then morning’s dawn reminds me
Of the sonnet s I’ve expressed
And I rush to write them down
I find….they’re all repressed.

*Sigh*
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Cold Spell

Contributed by Psyche on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:24:56 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I try to write as scheduled
In verse, in rhyme, in tone
But cannot for the life of me
Find a “voice” I own

In aiming for simplicity
My verse is short and blunt
Need have I to triumph fear
And plural syllables confront

And yea, when darkness overtakes
My ruminating mind
It corresponds with best ideas
I’ve searched all day to find

Then morning’s dawn reminds me
Of the sonnet s I’ve expressed
And I rush to write them down
I find….they’re all repressed.

*Sigh*

Copyright Â© Psyche ... [ 2005-02-07 21:24:56]
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Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanna on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:35:52 PM AEST
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The title tugged at me, the verses drew me in. Well written.
~T

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 09:56:14 PM AEST
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You'd be surprised how unique you really are.

Well done, my friend.

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:22:42 PM AEST
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this is a very well written poem
i really like it.

elizabeth (catz77)

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:23:46 PM AEST
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Oh! that I could write like this and call it struggling!!!!

THIS is terrific. Your "voice" is here. It is difficult, in my opinion, to recognize one's own voice... but it grows louder in time, I think.

Keep writing,
SNM

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:36:37 PM AEST
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Honestly Psyche, I felt like this was a joy to read because it *was* so well and honestly expressed. I especially liked the second line of the first stanza "In verse, in rhyme, in tone." Almost sounds like you've been in my class at school Nice job!

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 10:44:55 PM AEST
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Awesome write...lacks nothing from where I sit...
Jenni

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 12:27:08 AM AEST
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I love the poem, especially the title of it.

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:26:33 PM AEST
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I really liked this. It's very well written. Nice work.

Re: Cold Spell (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:52:22 AM AEST
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Wow this was an amazing poem. You could tell this couldn't have been easy, yet not too difficult with your creative mind and beautiful insight. Love it!

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