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Array ( [sid] => 8348 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Sweet revenge [time] => 2002-12-10 13:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You misguided me through my youth
Told me lies I thought was truth
Give me your hands and guide me through
Even though all you want is what is whats good for you
See me now I'm on my knees
Through blood torn ears, hear my pleas
Through hate filled eyes you see me stare
You know hell...i'll meet you there
I trusted you with my heart and life
You stabbed me deep with a darkened knife
Left me bleeding, left me pleading
You saw me crying, thought I was dying
Kicked me hard when I was down
Spread the lies all over town
I had to learn to walk again
Unsupported the reborn slain
I had to bleed, look deep inside
Find who I was, I could not hide
Then I felt it wash over me
It was death not sympathy
Then I smelt you
What death had dealt you
The hunter finds
Whats yours is mine
I take your life like you took mine
Bleed for me, it feels so fine
I look deep into you stare
Recognise what is there
The same look in your eyes
When you left me to my blood and cries
I see the smoke you draw from your breath
I hope your entertaining death
As for me I am an emotionless soul
Devoid of feeling, with no control

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Sweet revenge

Contributed by korax on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You misguided me through my youth
Told me lies I thought was truth
Give me your hands and guide me through
Even though all you want is what is whats good for you
See me now I'm on my knees
Through blood torn ears, hear my pleas
Through hate filled eyes you see me stare
You know hell...i'll meet you there
I trusted you with my heart and life
You stabbed me deep with a darkened knife
Left me bleeding, left me pleading
You saw me crying, thought I was dying
Kicked me hard when I was down
Spread the lies all over town
I had to learn to walk again
Unsupported the reborn slain
I had to bleed, look deep inside
Find who I was, I could not hide
Then I felt it wash over me
It was death not sympathy
Then I smelt you
What death had dealt you
The hunter finds
Whats yours is mine
I take your life like you took mine
Bleed for me, it feels so fine
I look deep into you stare
Recognise what is there
The same look in your eyes
When you left me to my blood and cries
I see the smoke you draw from your breath
I hope your entertaining death
As for me I am an emotionless soul
Devoid of feeling, with no control





Copyright © korax ... [ 2002-12-10 13:30:00]
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Re: Sweet revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Icequeen on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 03:23:44 PM AEST
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Hey, i really loved this, excellently composed, full of feelings. Its great :)
IceQueen


Re: Sweet revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 03:26:05 PM AEST
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this is an absolutely awesome poem...one of the best i had read...i love it so much...wow...


Re: Sweet revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by KiEme on Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 05:06:20 PM AEST
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Love it


Re: Sweet revenge (User Rating: 1 )
by Twinky on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 02:28:33 PM AEST
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ohh my goodness i really enjoyed reading this poem!!!!! it was put together very nicley!!!! definately something i would reccoment others to read!!!




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