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ummm...i love you
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 09:45:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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it was a friday
the day i realzied
that i could spend always w/ you
that i WAS in love
you were so supportive
you looked sad
but had a good front
you were incredible
you said you wanted best for me
i felt a pang in my heart
as i realized i hit
i was done falling
i was there
i wanted to cry
scream
laugh and kiss you
all at the same time
but all that time i felt hurt
maybe it was bc i hit hard
maybe bc i knew i couldnt leave
and didnt want to
i never understood
but i do know i care
i deeply love you
and i hope you never leave
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Re: ummm...i love you
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by DesolantDreamer on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:32:16 PM AEST
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What a beautiful poem. It is seeping with emotion. Very good write! Keep it up!
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