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You’re only but an acquaintance
And for only a few short moments we converse
Yet within those moments
You’ve made me laugh
You’ve made me cry
Twisting my emotions
And entangling them in my mind
I can no longer understand what I feel
But I know that what you’ve left in me
Is more than what I’ve felt before
And when I try to push it out
It just won’t leave
Even as months pass by
Still this feeling won’t diminish
As much as I try to let you go I can’t
Until I am broken inside
And the pain you’ve caused me becomes more than I can bear
And finally I let you slip away
Letting go of what I once held so dear
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Presence

Contributed by Somario on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:05:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I hardly know you
You’re only but an acquaintance
And for only a few short moments we converse
Yet within those moments
You’ve made me laugh
You’ve made me cry
Twisting my emotions
And entangling them in my mind
I can no longer understand what I feel
But I know that what you’ve left in me
Is more than what I’ve felt before
And when I try to push it out
It just won’t leave
Even as months pass by
Still this feeling won’t diminish
As much as I try to let you go I can’t
Until I am broken inside
And the pain you’ve caused me becomes more than I can bear
And finally I let you slip away
Letting go of what I once held so dear

Copyright Â© Somario ... [ 2005-02-08 22:05:51]
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Re: Presence (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:34:36 PM AEST
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This is really awesome!! I can identify with it so much. It is truly hard to let go..

Welcome to YPDC..Hope to see lots more of your work here..

Jenni

Re: Presence (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:23:38 PM AEST
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What a fabulous first post, Somario. I like this a lot. It tugs at me... and reminds me - just how powerful a moment can be. *sigh*

Welcome to YPDC, Somario!!

Nicely done!
~SNM~

Re: Presence (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 09:46:58 PM AEST
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Great poem. Most moment people try to forget... they erase bad memories from their mind... if you know what I mean. This poem would bring them back, which reflects how great it is...
Jodi

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