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Array ( [sid] => 83716 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Score [time] => 2005-02-09 19:44:47 [hometext] => This was written for who I thought was my first love..but i was way wrong all that he wanted was to hurt me. [bodytext] => As i laid in your arms
i thought it was true
how stupid i was
should've already knew
things wouldn't go my way,
it all happend so fast there was nothin to say
about whether or not this is the right choice,
answer or thing to do.
I should've waited and thought about it more
because all i am now is just another score.
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The Score

Contributed by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:44:47 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



As i laid in your arms
i thought it was true
how stupid i was
should've already knew
things wouldn't go my way,
it all happend so fast there was nothin to say
about whether or not this is the right choice,
answer or thing to do.
I should've waited and thought about it more
because all i am now is just another score.




Copyright © XxCrYiNg4YoUxX ... [ 2005-02-09 19:44:47]
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Re: The Score (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 07:58:48 PM AEST
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very hurtful indeed. Shame on that guy!
Want me to whoop his arss for you? Im really very nice but hate clueless abuser men they suck butt!
Michelle


Re: The Score (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:19:57 PM AEST
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My exboyfriend did the same thing to me
I'll be glad to beat that guys ass for you
after i beat ex's ass

Amber


Re: The Score (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:43:23 PM AEST
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oh wow..this really hit a nerve because this happened to me too.. yup just anotha score in his black book.....as u can see im still angry about it...but i love this..it was great
i love the first few lines and im sorry he didnt deserve u...i kno how u feel...all my poems r about him




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