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Array ( [sid] => 83745 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ashes [time] => 2005-02-09 21:57:04 [hometext] => My first attempt at some religious poetry, and though not my best work, one of my favorites. This is written for Ash Wednesday. [bodytext] => A symbol on my forehead
A prayer within my heart
A sign for all the sheep He led
A place for Lent to start

You wore a crown of thorns for me
And I, a cross for you
You died to let my soul be free
And through my faith in you, it grew

From dust we were created
From the very earth we came
To the Fall we were fated
Paradise is ours to reclaim

These ashes on my forehead
Cleanse me, who was flawed
And tell you, who for me was bled,
How much I love you, God. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 305 [topic] => 11 [informant] => yellow_sundragon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Ashes

Contributed by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 09:57:04 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

A symbol on my forehead
A prayer within my heart
A sign for all the sheep He led
A place for Lent to start

You wore a crown of thorns for me
And I, a cross for you
You died to let my soul be free
And through my faith in you, it grew

From dust we were created
From the very earth we came
To the Fall we were fated
Paradise is ours to reclaim

These ashes on my forehead
Cleanse me, who was flawed
And tell you, who for me was bled,
How much I love you, God.

Copyright © yellow_sundragon ... [ 2005-02-09 21:57:04]
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Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 10:44:03 PM AEST
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El dios es muerto

Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 01:41:22 AM AEST
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It is beautiful. It doesn't come off as your first attempt. You did a wonderful job on this poem.

J~

Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by WhiteDove47 on Thursday, 10th February 2005 @ 06:12:38 PM AEST
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What a great writing you did ! The words you used made my heart jump for joy for the Lord ! Thanks.

Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:27:37 PM AEST
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This is a correction to afterdark's spanish comment.

El dios es no muerto.

Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:35:48 AM AEST
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Very nicely done, darlin. I had them stupid ashes on my head in primary school, walked around with a bit one my cheek for the rest of the day too... and nobody told me *pouts* lol

Hugs 'n Love
S'meee
- Becca

Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 05:10:11 PM AEST
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I found this beautiful and inspiring. Keep this up, to be sure.

Andrew

Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:26:14 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt sweetie:) hugs n' remember i loves ya nessa xxx

@->>->:-

Re: Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 07:33:36 PM AEST
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What a sweet poem. It is simple, like faith is supposed to be. Great job!!

Carol

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