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[title] => A Kiss!!! (Re)
[time] => 2002-12-11 05:00:00
[hometext] => This is a revised edition of a poem perveriosly posted. I read it over and found its pace could be better and it ending could flow better so I made a change to its ending and added and subtracted punctuations where I felt it was needed and was propper to improve its flow. The poem itself is about the power of a kiss, to express the feelings, emotions, passion, inside that we can not, inwords, bring ourselves to express to that one, who so catches our fancy. With just one kiss we can say all the things that with, words, we can not!!!
[bodytext] => Innocent is a kiss Pure is its’ emotion. Yours would bring, such bliss My eternal devotion, For, once I’d tasted those lips, How could anything compare to it? How could anything else, ever, I accept? There’s nothing even close to it, I expect. Those sweet cherry lips of yours, with mine, should meet. I’d like to engross you, in my kisses, sweet. I’d like to gently, tenderly, softly, press my lips to yours, And with that, innocent, sweet, action, show you, all of my love, Those overwhelming emotions, that I, sometimes, can’t seem to express, When in your rapture I am, totally, swept. I get lost, in you, and just seem to lose my words. Emotion felt, so clearly, just seemed to get blurred, And are, somehow, lost to me. My tongue gets tied, and I just can’t speak. If the words would come, I would tell you All the wondrous things I feel inside. I’d like to use, my kiss, to help to, Express the things I feel inside. I’d like to bring to you, the same feelings, Enwrap you, like you’ve enraptured me. I’d like to send you, too, reeling, Just as you do to me, And, with my kiss, I might, hence, win you, With the emotions, trapped, inside of me. With my lips, I’ll try to convince you, that you should be with me. Where words may have failed me, A sweet kiss shall not. My words they may have impaled me But my kiss shall show my heart, And, with this kiss of mine, I shall win you, When my lips meet thine, I’ll arouse, within you, The same feelings I feel inside And, with my passion, I’ll, enwrap, you Leaving, me, you, enamored of. I’ll engross you, in my kiss, and I shall win, your love!!! Robert Gardiner R.G.Love [comments] => 2 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 2 [informant] => R.G.Love [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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