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Array ( [sid] => 83940 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fool With A Hundred Faces [time] => 2005-02-11 06:12:06 [hometext] => I seem to have made a lot of bad decisions lately, which inspired this piece. The title is taken from an old painting of a jester, I can't remember its name. Any and all comments appreciated. [bodytext] => Thievery smiles; oh she's proud of your sins
Faithless seraphs bow in mockery's mirth:
"Hail all thee, the fool with a hundred faces."

Breathe deep, the sun is setting now for good
Don't think escapism will redeem you;
Thievery smiles; oh she knows you won't win.

Mistakes shine off your hands in glaring red
Wilted now, stems of what you can't undo:
"Hail all thee, the fool with a hundred faces."

You dreamt that all had bloomed to life again
Until their barren eyes struck to remind
That once you burn, your ashes can't be saved.

Living is loving and loving is death
You're an accidental wreckage long scorned;
Thievery smiles; oh her conquest is done.

Enter now, dreams in which I'll follow Death
As far away from causing harm, I'll run!
Away from voices that echo my shame:
"Hail all thee, the fool with a hundred faces." [comments] => 11 [counter] => 279 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Avarice_Riot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Fool With A Hundred Faces

Contributed by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 06:12:06 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Thievery smiles; oh she's proud of your sins
Faithless seraphs bow in mockery's mirth:
"Hail all thee, the fool with a hundred faces."

Breathe deep, the sun is setting now for good
Don't think escapism will redeem you;
Thievery smiles; oh she knows you won't win.

Mistakes shine off your hands in glaring red
Wilted now, stems of what you can't undo:
"Hail all thee, the fool with a hundred faces."

You dreamt that all had bloomed to life again
Until their barren eyes struck to remind
That once you burn, your ashes can't be saved.

Living is loving and loving is death
You're an accidental wreckage long scorned;
Thievery smiles; oh her conquest is done.

Enter now, dreams in which I'll follow Death
As far away from causing harm, I'll run!
Away from voices that echo my shame:
"Hail all thee, the fool with a hundred faces."




Copyright © Avarice_Riot ... [ 2005-02-11 06:12:06]
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Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:15:09 AM AEST
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A good poem.


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:12:58 AM AEST
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Wow so powerful, but such pain & regret in your words..... you are such a beautiful & talented poet..... I will forever be in awe of your work my dear friend!!!!


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 12:42:29 PM AEST
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Woah...This is brilliant.
I really have missed your poems. I really should read them more often.

I hope things work out for you soon hun,
*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:55:12 PM AEST
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lots of hidden meanings and reading between the lines.

this is flawless.

amazing write. just wow.....
great work.
Arden


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:24:24 AM AEST
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To me this is a mystery. I'm very curious of the 'point'.

"Hail all thee, the fool with a hundred faces."

The concept of this is intriguing..I can
interpret this piece in different ways..in my
opinion, that's a trait of a good piece of
writing. The way you set out your words is
very creative. You have a talent.


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:06:58 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
we all make bad choices in life but the beauty of it all is that each new day brings a brand new chance.
huggs,
emy


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:45:18 AM AEST
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"You dreamt that all had bloomed to life again
Until their barren eyes struck to remind That once you burn, your ashes can't be saved".so true..I can relate these lines..Some days ago I too felt that I was a fool with hundred tears...
lol..its really a thought provoking good write:-) venkat



Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 14th March 2006 @ 05:17:09 AM AEST
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Dear AV,

just brilliant. I read this one some time ago and can't believe I didn't comment. Raw, beautiful, despairing, with the pained cynicism born of aching loss. But what progeny!

bravo,

Spike


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 12:18:53 AM AEST
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"His mercies are new every morning."

...He took your sin apon His cross
and if you will but count it lost
He has gladly paid the cost
He can carefully burn away the dross

and as you die you too shall live!
as He can, yourself truly forgive
resting in Eternal Light of Love
and life and peace and fervent joy thereof...

~excerpt from "the temptress"

true love is when you die to yourself to live for someone else.


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 11:53:49 AM AEST
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"You're an accidental wreckage long scorned;"

Brilliant line!! As is this whole thought provoking write.
Exceptional word choices and the subject matter is one
I feel deeply. Excellent portrayal of emotion here.

masterful work. Truly.

~Breezy


Re: Fool With A Hundred Faces (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th March 2014 @ 01:16:03 PM AEST
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I hope you are doing better now after all these years. I have felt this way quite often. You put it into words with emotional excellence!

Tim




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