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The blood drips
Melodically from my skin
As the poison spreads
With venomous pain
Within

The reasons go deeper
Than the blade ever could
But the shallowness
Dulls the serrated edge
Rusted over with tears

Void of all emotions
That were slowly killed
By the deserving guilt

The metal's passion
Is fed with blood
And fulfilled with death

Compensating the sacrifice for it
With what was wanted in the end
But the serrated edge is too dull
From all of the blood that's left it full
With lack of passion [comments] => 9 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Serrated with Passion

Contributed by essentially9 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:00:44 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Serrated with Passion

The blood drips
Melodically from my skin
As the poison spreads
With venomous pain
Within

The reasons go deeper
Than the blade ever could
But the shallowness
Dulls the serrated edge
Rusted over with tears

Void of all emotions
That were slowly killed
By the deserving guilt

The metal's passion
Is fed with blood
And fulfilled with death

Compensating the sacrifice for it
With what was wanted in the end
But the serrated edge is too dull
From all of the blood that's left it full
With lack of passion

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-02-11 21:00:44]
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Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:06:11 PM AEST
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Very powerful, heart-racing poem. A remarkable write. Good job.

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:29:37 PM AEST
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Odd poem for me, but you have an imagination...Keep on writing. OK?

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Taurusgem1 on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:31:23 PM AEST
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Sad. But Good

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:48:47 PM AEST
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Very discriptive Jinnifer, Another great write that puts most poems to shame.... :)

Clark

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 09:50:43 PM AEST
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This is one of the best I have read in a long while..I ***** you not this is pure genius from the start to finish..

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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awesome

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 01:46:17 AM AEST
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Wow...amazing write.

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:54:48 AM AEST
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So much sorrow, and depth from such powerful and chilling words, excellent poem.

Re: Serrated with Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:42:37 AM AEST
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Deep, Descriptive and powerful. You are truly a wonderful writer. *envies* -Sami-

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