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Array ( [sid] => 84199 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => reality [time] => 2005-02-13 02:09:17 [hometext] => life is neva gona change [bodytext] => This s hit is getting to far its gettin too deep,
My brain is so in it it never shuts off not even to sleep.
running on an hour a week,
words try to come out but no one can understand what i speak.
Ive pushed everyone away i have closed everyone out,
they cant come in it now and if they wanted to i would have doubt.
One problem after the next it never stops,
I live my life with negativity having realistic thoughts.
People say it will get better one day,
but the reality is that, that is just something people say.
to make you feel better to keep you standin tall,
but you know its all over you are going to have to take that fall.
you know it will come cuz nothing will go the way you want,
your present, future, and past will always taunt.
your better off having that negativity cuz then you wont be surprised,
you think good things are coming but it is just bad s hit in disguse. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 13 [informant] => bluebird [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

reality

Contributed by bluebird on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:09:17 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This s hit is getting to far its gettin too deep,
My brain is so in it it never shuts off not even to sleep.
running on an hour a week,
words try to come out but no one can understand what i speak.
Ive pushed everyone away i have closed everyone out,
they cant come in it now and if they wanted to i would have doubt.
One problem after the next it never stops,
I live my life with negativity having realistic thoughts.
People say it will get better one day,
but the reality is that, that is just something people say.
to make you feel better to keep you standin tall,
but you know its all over you are going to have to take that fall.
you know it will come cuz nothing will go the way you want,
your present, future, and past will always taunt.
your better off having that negativity cuz then you wont be surprised,
you think good things are coming but it is just bad s hit in disguse.

Copyright © bluebird ... [ 2005-02-13 02:09:17]
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Re: reality (User Rating: 1 )
by apollo on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:40:10 PM AEST
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that is so true i mean just when you think things are good they get bad, then again however, just when you think things are at its worst something good happens. keep thinking high thoughts and i promise things will work out in the end.

brandon

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