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Array ( [sid] => 84221 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give and Take [time] => 2005-02-13 10:37:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Nothing worth dieing for anymore
So I'd rather die
Feeling that this life is a sore
I'd rather give up, then try

...

Nothing worth living for anymore
I'd rather not live
Feeling that death is what I'm looking for
I'll slit my wrists, and watch the blood sieve

...

Because after I thought about it,
I noticed that life has no motive
Its a give and take thing
Except my life
Only goes in one motion

...

I always Give
And you always Take
So I'll take the last thing
I have to give

...

Without another thought
My life Ends [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Give and Take

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:37:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Nothing worth dieing for anymore
So I'd rather die
Feeling that this life is a sore
I'd rather give up, then try

...

Nothing worth living for anymore
I'd rather not live
Feeling that death is what I'm looking for
I'll slit my wrists, and watch the blood sieve

...

Because after I thought about it,
I noticed that life has no motive
Its a give and take thing
Except my life
Only goes in one motion

...

I always Give
And you always Take
So I'll take the last thing
I have to give

...

Without another thought
My life Ends




Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-13 10:37:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Give and Take (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:43:44 PM AEST
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good write but hey write about what leads to these thoughts and feelings u know keep em comin i like


Re: Give and Take (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:39:48 PM AEST
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this site makes me feel the same so many times. giving so much, and getting nothing. kind of pointless. so i broke the cycle for a while with an experiment with patrick. nothing is ever worth dying for. nothing is worth living for. so ill just resurrect you back like jesus, so you can post more =]


Re: Give and Take (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:41:12 PM AEST
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Wonderful yet another beautiful poem. You have talent great piece, ill be waiting for more writes.

--amanda--




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