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Array ( [sid] => 84299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm Dead Inside (Now That You're Gone) [time] => 2005-02-13 21:27:42 [hometext] => This is in a punk rocker/rap music classification [bodytext] => Oh...baby baby I'm dying inside

It's raining today
And it seems kind of fitting
'Cause I'm drowning inside
Today is just starting
And you're already gone
And yet I scream and shout
Wishing you were here
To wipe the tears
Away from my eyes

I'm dying inside
Now that you're gone
You're not standing here
And I can't stop it!

I'm dying inside
And I'm hating it

I'm fighting a raging battle within
And I'm losing it
With every mile you drive
You're farther away
And I'm losing it
Am I going crazy?
Am I already there?
I am losing the battle

I'm dying inside
You're not standing here
And I can't stop it!

I'm dying inside
And I'm hating it

Peace and hope
Far away
Stars welcome me
With a sparkling gaze
Tears falling on the water
Water falling on my face
The sun rising
Scaring me out of my daze
Another lonley day
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I'm Dead Inside (Now That You're Gone)

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:27:42 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Oh...baby baby I'm dying inside

It's raining today
And it seems kind of fitting
'Cause I'm drowning inside
Today is just starting
And you're already gone
And yet I scream and shout
Wishing you were here
To wipe the tears
Away from my eyes

I'm dying inside
Now that you're gone
You're not standing here
And I can't stop it!

I'm dying inside
And I'm hating it

I'm fighting a raging battle within
And I'm losing it
With every mile you drive
You're farther away
And I'm losing it
Am I going crazy?
Am I already there?
I am losing the battle

I'm dying inside
You're not standing here
And I can't stop it!

I'm dying inside
And I'm hating it

Peace and hope
Far away
Stars welcome me
With a sparkling gaze
Tears falling on the water
Water falling on my face
The sun rising
Scaring me out of my daze
Another lonley day
Gone by

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2005-02-13 21:27:42]
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Re: I'm Dead Inside (Now That You're Gone) (User Rating: 1 )
by Kachina on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:51:49 PM AEST
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Wow! I loved it!! This poem would be the perfect rock song.

Re: I'm Dead Inside (Now That You're Gone) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:12:56 AM AEST
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I loved it, i know how you feel.

Re: I'm Dead Inside (Now That You're Gone) (User Rating: 1 )
by b_rand on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:40:18 AM AEST
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i don't usually like poems that don't have a consistent rhyme scheme, but this is really good

i think maybe i like this cuz i love the idea of rain drowning ... i've written about it in a few of my poems, mayube u should check them out

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