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Array ( [sid] => 84314 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I See Thee Now, Forevermore [time] => 2005-02-13 22:25:32 [hometext] => I know what I've done, How I hurt you... [bodytext] => I saw you standing there
Under a silver moon sky
Watching as the world went by

I saw you cry
Your tears glittering like the oceans
I saw
I saw
What I've done to you

I watched you from the same old bar
Same old time
'Bartender pour me something strong'
This old room
In the middle of a blackened world

And now I'm staring up above
Under a silver moon sky
Watching as the clouds roll by

I watch as the ocean
Steals my love
Your beautiful face
Dissappearing beneath a gray monster

I wonder what would have become
Of us
If you would lay beside me
And chase away my pain

But it's just another dream
A silly though
That I'll tuck away for another day

I saw you
I saw you
I see you still
Everywhere I go you're there

Until the day I die
I will love a man
Who gave me everything
And took my heart from me

Alas,
The Doves that carry me away
Deep into the night
Cry tears of crimson [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 32 [informant] => night_child [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I See Thee Now, Forevermore

Contributed by night_child on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:25:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I saw you standing there
Under a silver moon sky
Watching as the world went by

I saw you cry
Your tears glittering like the oceans
I saw
I saw
What I've done to you

I watched you from the same old bar
Same old time
'Bartender pour me something strong'
This old room
In the middle of a blackened world

And now I'm staring up above
Under a silver moon sky
Watching as the clouds roll by

I watch as the ocean
Steals my love
Your beautiful face
Dissappearing beneath a gray monster

I wonder what would have become
Of us
If you would lay beside me
And chase away my pain

But it's just another dream
A silly though
That I'll tuck away for another day

I saw you
I saw you
I see you still
Everywhere I go you're there

Until the day I die
I will love a man
Who gave me everything
And took my heart from me

Alas,
The Doves that carry me away
Deep into the night
Cry tears of crimson

Copyright © night_child ... [ 2005-02-13 22:25:32]
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Re: I See Thee Now, Forevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by Night_Child on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:37:06 PM AEST
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Oops...."A silly Thought*"

Re: I See Thee Now, Forevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by fuzzywuzzy on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:07:40 AM AEST
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tears of crimson.. interesting.. nice read. speaking of doves..I feed them, along with a zillion other birds in my yard..they are getting sooo fat and I hope hunting season isn't near...lol

Re: I See Thee Now, Forevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by Night_Child on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:38:47 PM AEST
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Lol...Doves are pretty ^_^

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