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Array ( [sid] => 84414 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i wonder [time] => 2005-02-14 17:41:00 [hometext] => first time writin poetry really lol..i usually write stories but i cant send them in on this site for some reason ok here goes...lol [bodytext] => I wonder would it of been different,
A strain is put upon me and now I have no choice,
A chain will follow me now,
Around my neck and it won't let me go

A breaking heart, a shattered glass,
All things that are inside of me,
Yet I cannot begin to understand anymore as to why it should be me,
What hurt and pain have I caused this world to have,

I live, I breathe in all that others do,
I shoukdn't feel so upset,
Others around me suffer more than I,
Why should I cry with tears I don't deserve

And so I wonder,
I wonder if we had all been born the same,
Would I feel any better,
Although how would i Know....
What point is there in wondering

Wondering with dreams which will never happen
I will always feel low and no one can lift my head up high
Crystals will always fall,
silently there is nothing left

So I now wonder again [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pink_bullets [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

i wonder

Contributed by pink_bullets on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:41:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I wonder would it of been different,
A strain is put upon me and now I have no choice,
A chain will follow me now,
Around my neck and it won't let me go

A breaking heart, a shattered glass,
All things that are inside of me,
Yet I cannot begin to understand anymore as to why it should be me,
What hurt and pain have I caused this world to have,

I live, I breathe in all that others do,
I shoukdn't feel so upset,
Others around me suffer more than I,
Why should I cry with tears I don't deserve

And so I wonder,
I wonder if we had all been born the same,
Would I feel any better,
Although how would i Know....
What point is there in wondering

Wondering with dreams which will never happen
I will always feel low and no one can lift my head up high
Crystals will always fall,
silently there is nothing left

So I now wonder again

Copyright © pink_bullets ... [ 2005-02-14 17:41:00]
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Re: i wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:09:48 PM AEST
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nice first write i liked ur use of questions

remember 2 post on other ppls stuff too!

and cant wait 2 read sum of ur new stuff

Re: i wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST
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Hey, this is actually a pretty first good write.
I liked the metaphors used, and the way it was all set up..
The flow was good too.
Keep writing!

~Kt

Re: i wonder (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 06:26:05 AM AEST
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this is beautiful cres..

love xxx

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