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I Love You I Hate You
Contributed by
bigtig6269
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:30:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Baby, I swear, I really do love you
You say I dont but I promise I do
I HATE YOU, I CANT STAND FOR YOU TO BE AROUND
IT MAKES ME EVEN ANGRIER WHEN YOU UTTER A SOUND
I love the way you are, the way you act
BUT I REALLY THINK YOU NEED SOME PROZAC
You are great one minute, the next you flip
Watch all that turning, you might break a hip
Baby youre so great, you can do anything with no help
How are you supposed to support me, you cant support yourself
You stupid little girl, look at all that I have done
Youre just mad because I dont think youre the one
Youre so strong and powerful, such a cool jock
Look, youve got to understand, youre just a dirt rock
I still care for you, youre great on the inside
But now when I see you, I want some pesticide
You think youre the only one who can tolerate me
HA, Im in college, youre easily replaceable, just wait and see
Dont make me start calling out names
You have no idea how good I am at these games
What happened to you lover, we were so cool when we were going out
But now I see your true side you little trick, I see what youre all about
I love you so much, the ways your eyes shine like a light
What do you say we go watch a movie tonight
I CANT STAND TO BE AROUND YOU AND WATCH YOU WALK
I WANT TO CUT MY EARS OFF FOR HEARING YOU TALK
But since you chose to act like a selfish jerk
There is no way this relationship will ever work
So now I choose to show you the door
Finally, I dont have to put up with your crap anymore.
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bigtig6269
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2005-02-15 00:30:57]
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Re: I Love You I Hate You
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 12:56:05 AM AEST
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I love it...Great flow even when it was'nt structured (Im a structure freak) but seriously I love this poem all the jecyle and hyde moments were great...
Great job!
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Re: I Love You I Hate You
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by Dri on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:49:18 PM AEST
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| the rhyme scheme seemed a little forced... a lot forced... but i get where you are coming from |
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