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THEY
Contributed by
Onslaught
on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 03:34:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
scifi
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They are the ones who bring alteration,
They are the influencers,
They are the observers from above,
They are the outsiders looking down.
They are of nowhere and they are of notime.
They exist outside of reality.
They exist seperate from any universe, from any dimension.
They see everything within our infinite universe.
They see it all at once, the past, the present, and the future.
And this is what they see
We are all, merely, the reverberations in Spacetime
From that resounding, eruption of the first moment of creation,
From the original explosion propelling outwards,
When all history in and of time
Occurred all at once, simultaneously.
We are only the echo, repeating forever into eternity
What has already been written.
Copyright ©
Onslaught
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2005-02-15 03:34:06]
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Re: THEY
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by Flipped_out on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:30:32 AM AEST
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Wow Mike, love this, good job ive been doing my quantum physics homework...this poem reflects things I have thought about many many times, so wonderfully written Mike, you show your genius
Love, Kelly x |
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Re: THEY
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:35:14 AM AEST
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wow! you do deep and meaningful well, great work.
Johnny. |
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Re: THEY
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by Onslaught on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:11:29 PM AEST
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| Thanks again Johnny and Kelly. I appreciate your positive reinforcement and support, I'm always encouraged to think more and write more, just to give you all something great to read and think about as well. I know that in Kelly's case I have inspired her to be interested in physics and from some of the poems that I have read from her on similar subjects, she clearly shares the same genius to which she has labeled me. Thanks and much love. Peace to you and everyone that you know and meet. |
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Re: THEY
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by brew on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 03:53:54 PM AEST
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A write that inspires, as well and makes one deep thought. Good write.like thst style.
Brew~ |
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Re: THEY
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by mom11159 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:47:56 PM AEST
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OMG this is so incredible you kept me interested through out so deep so wonderful This is an exceptionally written poem I want more more please more Loved it
Excellent job
Cathy |
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