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Anxiously fall upon her brow
Talented words, skipping beside her perked ears
Awaiting a secret, troubled wonderfully of love

Snow angels laughing in the sparkled rays of heat
Sun drenched, frozen; abandoned by her warmth
Are shapeless to her form, faceless, deserted
Mocking the joy, vanishing with each wind

Colorless white blowing frost bruising her cheeks
She giggles as the chill shoots through her
His eye intense frustration, claiming her soul

With only the glare of deceitful lust
Approaching feet crunch the newly fallen snow
The heat from his mouth scorches her face
Foreign words, English formed hiss out

Love disappearing from her inner thoughts
Shocking truth melts the hopeful snowflakes
As the footprints of moments ago
Form the perfect line of his departure
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Snow Angels

Contributed by Taurusgem1 on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 01:25:58 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Idiosyncrasies of a winter snow
Anxiously fall upon her brow
Talented words, skipping beside her perked ears
Awaiting a secret, troubled wonderfully of love

Snow angels laughing in the sparkled rays of heat
Sun drenched, frozen; abandoned by her warmth
Are shapeless to her form, faceless, deserted
Mocking the joy, vanishing with each wind

Colorless white blowing frost bruising her cheeks
She giggles as the chill shoots through her
His eye intense frustration, claiming her soul

With only the glare of deceitful lust
Approaching feet crunch the newly fallen snow
The heat from his mouth scorches her face
Foreign words, English formed hiss out

Love disappearing from her inner thoughts
Shocking truth melts the hopeful snowflakes
As the footprints of moments ago
Form the perfect line of his departure

Copyright © Taurusgem1 ... [ 2005-02-15 13:25:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Snow Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 02:05:58 PM AEST
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Wonderful. Thoroughly enjoyable read.
Stitch

Re: Snow Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:43:20 PM AEST
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Very moving and powerful write. Stirs a lot of emotions. Delightful and solemn at the same time.

....thank you for commenting on my poem, "Precious Love"

Tremendous write
Willofree

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