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Inconvience
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:10:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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any way i look at it Its grab the gun and ***** with him im sorry for waiting around to say Pack your *****, better leave today. I've had enough of your bull***** Take your slobbish greed and run with it I wont be your convient toy on hand So give me that child support and be a man.
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Re: Inconvience
(User Rating: 1 ) by xxbreathlessx on
Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 05:58:28 PM AEST (User
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i have to say i love the last line, it makes the big impact on your poem. goodjob!
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