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Array ( [sid] => 84568 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => tired [time] => 2005-02-15 20:43:53 [hometext] => 'bout my mom tell me what ya think [bodytext] => I’m so tired of being sorry for the things I never did
All the crap you put me through and the feelings that I hid
You have no expectations with me I have no trust with you
I’m tired of all the crap you think I've done or that I'll do
I hate the way you look at me like there's nothing I’m good for
Try as I might to please you you're always wanting more
Please don’t yell at me your words are cold
Don’t you know the power they hold
You don’t understand the pain you cause
When you put me down and pick at my flaws
I’m sorry if I don’t act the way normal people do
I’m sorry if you hate me just remember I’m like this because of you
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 6 [informant] => thisismesodeal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

tired

Contributed by thisismesodeal on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:43:53 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I’m so tired of being sorry for the things I never did
All the crap you put me through and the feelings that I hid
You have no expectations with me I have no trust with you
I’m tired of all the crap you think I've done or that I'll do
I hate the way you look at me like there's nothing I’m good for
Try as I might to please you you're always wanting more
Please don’t yell at me your words are cold
Don’t you know the power they hold
You don’t understand the pain you cause
When you put me down and pick at my flaws
I’m sorry if I don’t act the way normal people do
I’m sorry if you hate me just remember I’m like this because of you

Copyright Â© thisismesodeal ... [ 2005-02-15 20:43:53]
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Re: tired (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:47:12 PM AEST
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Excellent! I can definatley relate, though I don't blame it on my mom, I blame it on myself. I think its better to blame it on your mom though, nice job.

Re: tired (User Rating: 1 )
by Compton-tre-block on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:52:04 PM AEST
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MY MAS LIKE DAT TO...
YOU READ MY MIND WHEN YOU WROTE
THAT HOMIE!!!
GOOD WRITE

Re: tired (User Rating: 1 )
by AKA_Anonymous on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:01:49 PM AEST
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Wow. Simply amazing.
WRITE MORE!!
XD

Re: tired (User Rating: 1 )
by Taurusgem1 on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:13:10 PM AEST
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I absolutely love it. Parents never understand what they do to their kids. But here is some advice from a person who had ***** up parents. If you let them get you and make you nto a person you don't like or a person who has issues you let them win... Always stay strong and understand you can be your own person you don't have to turn out like them.

Re: tired (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:33:01 PM AEST
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This shows a lot of emotion, and that's great..there are words that could be used to make it stronger, but it's great ..and some puctuation would be nice if an editor ever sees it..he would expect it to be clean..(punctuated) but I love the raw emotion.. I posted some contests they're having in the forums..I "think" they're legit..

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