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Array ( [sid] => 84597 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Angel [time] => 2005-02-16 02:30:02 [hometext] => This poem is when I almost touched death due to my depression. [bodytext] => A soft touch grazes my arm,
turning to look while I feel no harm,
A burst of light enters my soul,
It turns as dark as the night,
And I'm forsted to pay the tole

Our eyes meet but I try not to stare,
I can't stand but to see it's glare,
I get pulled forth,
Forced to dance,
With the Angel,
The Black Angel of Death,
Her eyes still hooked on mine,
As I tremble with fear,
A red tear rolls down,
her face so near [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ESchell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Black Angel

Contributed by ESchell on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 02:30:02 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A soft touch grazes my arm,
turning to look while I feel no harm,
A burst of light enters my soul,
It turns as dark as the night,
And I'm forsted to pay the tole

Our eyes meet but I try not to stare,
I can't stand but to see it's glare,
I get pulled forth,
Forced to dance,
With the Angel,
The Black Angel of Death,
Her eyes still hooked on mine,
As I tremble with fear,
A red tear rolls down,
her face so near

Copyright © ESchell ... [ 2005-02-16 02:30:02]
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Re: Black Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:09:37 AM AEST
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ya know theres a black angel somewhere in Iowa...i forget where now...anyway....good job

always, abraham

Re: Black Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:13:28 AM AEST
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This is amazing!
It's ironic how our most painful moments can turn into something beautiful.
Great write!

Take Care~ Stellar

Re: Black Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:08:42 PM AEST
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it is funny how the black angle was sheding a tear... any way, this was a good poem I kow what its like to look at the approaching end and see all the thigs that you think will save you but in the end is only you who can do that.

I didi like this one I could feel the emotion you put in to this work, but please dont think like that, if you need hel[p just ask us here will always help. be strong and God bless.

wolfman

Re: Black Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:40:30 PM AEST
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never let your talent touch death.

Re: Black Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 03:05:27 AM AEST
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A great poem I am glad that you did not
succumb to death because that would've
been a tragedy. I hope you now find life worth
living as I do now. Keep on writing out your
pain instead of botting it up inside.

Bobo (Joel)

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