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Theres a hole in the mirror,
its always been there.
No one else ever sees it, it dosen't
seem fair.
Whats the matter? Can't you
see, the hole in the mirror, right where
a small piece of my soul should be. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 48 [informant] => zaknafein8891 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Hole in the Mirror

Contributed by zaknafein8891 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:11:36 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Theres a hole in the mirror,
its always been there.
No one else ever sees it, it dosen't
seem fair.
Whats the matter? Can't you
see, the hole in the mirror, right where
a small piece of my soul should be.

Copyright © zaknafein8891 ... [ 2005-02-16 08:11:36]
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Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:57:39 AM AEST
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Oh gosh, I really like this..
It's short but it says a lot. I love it.
I can relate to this quite a bit (I have also written lots of 'reflection' poems.
Great write.

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:01:24 AM AEST
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Well Zac I can relate, I feel the same way,like something is wrong or missing.
I really liked the way you portrayed it!!

Very nice write

Take care

Eve

Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:35:23 AM AEST
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Short, but insightful. Nice impact. Just the kind of poetry I like. Keep it up!
Stitch

Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy1125 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:19:12 PM AEST
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i really loved the way u chose the mirror to represent or symbolize ur soul..very unique and creative all @ da same tyme, ya kno? i'll b postin some of my original work on here soon ..but anyway...good job 110%

~Breezy-B~

Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:06:09 PM AEST
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expressed well. short but still deep.
Arden

Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by chrismahoney on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:47:09 AM AEST
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Alright, all credit due, this was really great, I mean it was short and sweet, but what you wanted to say and express were clearly put, good wording, good poem.

well done

Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by lexy on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 03:36:35 PM AEST
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hey...i finally got around to visiting the site. you know that i liked this one the first time you let me read it. luv ya,
~lexy
i'm still not gonna post any of my poetry here

Re: Hole in the Mirror (User Rating: 1 )
by lexy on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:31:37 PM AEST
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this one is still my favorite...this one and silver hues...they are my faves...i was the first to read them...ever...cuz you wrote them and let me rad them in guitar and english...that makes me happy...i miss you

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