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After You
Contributed by
Hooker
on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:16:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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the days have gone by and you're not around,
and here I am in the same old town,
you think that you have won,
but the battles over, war has begun,
I returned to have my life resurrected,
brought up and reconstructed,
and now after you I stand,
with one finger raised on each hand,
you did not win though you're blinded,
and you have not been reminded,
I have my friends, and all of yours,
you closed them, I reopened doors.
If you saw who my company is,
and whose bed this is,
you would cry for weeks,
those shiny tears on your cheeks,
and I've turned sadistic,
become evil as I can get,
People and Times you Spoke of,
are now the people and Times, I love,
So enjoy your stay, on the Texas Death Ride
I hope it hurts, and burns down inside,
you did not win, or even come close,
because of all, they missed me the most,
Live your life as you choose and see fit,
because to be honest, no ones gives a *****,
you've proved everyone right, and no one's wrong.
they knew you were an insane ***** all along.
Copyright ©
Hooker
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2005-02-19 19:16:23]
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Re: After You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:46:45 PM AEST
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Nicely done, very expressive and angry. It flows well and is written beautifully. I hope everything works out.
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Re: After You
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by Ninnyfarfar on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:28:28 AM AEST
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Great, i hope everything works out
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