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Array ( [sid] => 85005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2005-02-19 22:30:48 [hometext] => i feel this way alot and i just want to get it out for my sake, sorry if it seems scattered and doesnt make complete sense [bodytext] => Drowning in a pool of sorrow
I call out to you but you don't hear
I scream my lungs out
I have shed so many tears
When will this hurt go away?
When will i finally feel
That I am accepted
I am alone here
It's so sad and cold here
Please someone come and rescue me
I fight to stay above the puddle of tears
Which I have created
That no one comes near
Nobody cares the pain I feel
I am an innocent bystander
Like a deer caught in headlights
I duck and cover from all my fears
I never speak what I am truly feeling
I am afraid of will come if I do
Again and again I bite my tongue
Everyone says you're just too young
They say it will change in a matter of time
It feels like this time will never come
Like I will be stuck in this dark place forever
I shout out to realize
I am alone
No one is home
It is just me against myself
Is this the way you intended things to be
I am sick of these people
I am sick of this town
I no longer smile
It is always a frown
The smile is fake even when you are around
I am drained of all emotion
I am a walking zombie
In which everyone knows but does not see
No one sees the true me
Maybe that's because I am alone
Alone in this world
With no one to hate
But me and myself
I guess this is my fate
I hope that eventually I will see a brighter day
Instead of feeling like I am in a world of gray
I no longer want to feel
The way I have been feeling for so long
Alone
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Alone

Contributed by Les4567 on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 10:30:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Drowning in a pool of sorrow
I call out to you but you don't hear
I scream my lungs out
I have shed so many tears
When will this hurt go away?
When will i finally feel
That I am accepted
I am alone here
It's so sad and cold here
Please someone come and rescue me
I fight to stay above the puddle of tears
Which I have created
That no one comes near
Nobody cares the pain I feel
I am an innocent bystander
Like a deer caught in headlights
I duck and cover from all my fears
I never speak what I am truly feeling
I am afraid of will come if I do
Again and again I bite my tongue
Everyone says you're just too young
They say it will change in a matter of time
It feels like this time will never come
Like I will be stuck in this dark place forever
I shout out to realize
I am alone
No one is home
It is just me against myself
Is this the way you intended things to be
I am sick of these people
I am sick of this town
I no longer smile
It is always a frown
The smile is fake even when you are around
I am drained of all emotion
I am a walking zombie
In which everyone knows but does not see
No one sees the true me
Maybe that's because I am alone
Alone in this world
With no one to hate
But me and myself
I guess this is my fate
I hope that eventually I will see a brighter day
Instead of feeling like I am in a world of gray
I no longer want to feel
The way I have been feeling for so long
Alone




Copyright © Les4567 ... [ 2005-02-19 22:30:48]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:12:53 AM AEST
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i understand this feeling all too well. good job
thanks for sharing


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:38:09 PM AEST
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i think one reason i like your poems so much is you actually take the time to write them correctly. you take the time to spell and capitalize, and you set it in verse form. you are more accomplished than many of those here that have yet to realize how to spell four letter words.


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:48:40 PM AEST
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I've felt this way so many times before, and I currently feel like I'm in a state of loneliness. This really is a good write. Great job!




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