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Array ( [sid] => 85067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trust [time] => 2005-02-20 15:24:10 [hometext] => this is a true poem of something where i thought i could trust someone....hmmm still not sure about it though :) [bodytext] => How would you understand?
Why would you care?
You may have thoughts like mine
And dreams of things which would bring joy to us
But pain to others

i wish you wouldn't of told them
Does it make you feel happy?
You haven't helped
I wanted to do this and you wouldn't let me
How could you?

They watch me
Because of what you did
They listen to all that I say
Because of you
Does it still make you feel happy?

What does trust mean to me?
I wonder this
And though my heart thinks many things
I wish i knew what the word means to you

You found something out
You promised
A promise you shouldn't break
Why do that?
How could you?

i don't know what I feel for you anymore
I never trust people
You tried to make me trust you
It worked
Until this

Not again.
I won't be fooled
Never.
Trust?
Why would I do that again [comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 6 [informant] => pink_bullets [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Trust

Contributed by pink_bullets on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 03:24:10 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



How would you understand?
Why would you care?
You may have thoughts like mine
And dreams of things which would bring joy to us
But pain to others

i wish you wouldn't of told them
Does it make you feel happy?
You haven't helped
I wanted to do this and you wouldn't let me
How could you?

They watch me
Because of what you did
They listen to all that I say
Because of you
Does it still make you feel happy?

What does trust mean to me?
I wonder this
And though my heart thinks many things
I wish i knew what the word means to you

You found something out
You promised
A promise you shouldn't break
Why do that?
How could you?

i don't know what I feel for you anymore
I never trust people
You tried to make me trust you
It worked
Until this

Not again.
I won't be fooled
Never.
Trust?
Why would I do that again




Copyright © pink_bullets ... [ 2005-02-20 15:24:10]
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Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 03:32:24 PM AEST
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Very expressive and emotional. I hope things smooth out for you soon...

Take Care
- Becca


Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 02:03:02 PM AEST
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im sorry, im so sorry.. im crying. im so sorry. i didnt know how much you didnt want me to tell them.. i wish i could make it up to you but i realise you'll never trust me again. but i have to make you understand, i told them because i was afraid. i was so afraid you would, and i was selfish, because i didnt want you to leave me. you've been such a wonderful friend to me, you still are. and it didnt make me happy. if it did, i wouldnt be sat here with all these tears streaming down my face.. im so, so sorry..
xxx




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