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Array ( [sid] => 85157 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Buying Suicide [time] => 2005-02-21 12:45:11 [hometext] => kinda wierd but i think its good. [bodytext] => Hit play
Watch as the blade slips
Your buying your daughters suicide
Watch as her death is televised
Stop rewind
Watch the agony in her eyes
pain contorting her beautiful face
blood splattered screen
amused you watch
pause
Look at the note
zoom
read what she has wrote
'I wish you could understand
wish you could know
what its like to have your
suicide televised
and no one cares
Daddy if you are reading this,
why didnt you try and save me?'
play
stop
rewind
eject, your daughters suicide and lay it on the shelf [comments] => 5 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 36 [informant] => DamentedSuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Buying Suicide

Contributed by DamentedSuicide on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:45:11 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Hit play
Watch as the blade slips
Your buying your daughters suicide
Watch as her death is televised
Stop rewind
Watch the agony in her eyes
pain contorting her beautiful face
blood splattered screen
amused you watch
pause
Look at the note
zoom
read what she has wrote
'I wish you could understand
wish you could know
what its like to have your
suicide televised
and no one cares
Daddy if you are reading this,
why didnt you try and save me?'
play
stop
rewind
eject, your daughters suicide and lay it on the shelf

Copyright © DamentedSuicide ... [ 2005-02-21 12:45:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Buying Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:46:27 PM AEST
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that was weird, but very different I really liked it
pix xx

Re: Buying Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:10:11 PM AEST
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Your right... is it suppose to mean, like your in a room that is being taped.. from what i got from it i like it a lo.
GOD BLESS
*BEBE

Re: Buying Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:17:09 PM AEST
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Wow. This is a great poem, and very sad. I hope things get better for you.

Scott

Re: Buying Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:18:55 PM AEST
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so vivid and full of imagery details. liked this very much. Great job..

christina

Re: Buying Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 05:35:03 PM AEST
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with so many reality shows eating up the TV these days it probably is only a matter of time before we see some Dick Clark looking, plastic faced wannabee, hosting something like this.

I liked the format you used. I think it is pretty original. Nice.

D.Sapelo

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