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Array ( [sid] => 85232 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2005-02-21 22:19:29 [hometext] => couldnt think of a good title for this one [bodytext] => Denounced, gave in
I challenge you now
why do we change
for others views and not our own?
Be you.
Living in sin
I ask you now
We have rearranged
From what we truly are deep down
Inside.
Evil might win
I say dont allow
Words and actions of derranged
To take away your crown
Reign. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => kewter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Untitled

Contributed by kewter on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 10:19:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Denounced, gave in
I challenge you now
why do we change
for others views and not our own?
Be you.
Living in sin
I ask you now
We have rearranged
From what we truly are deep down
Inside.
Evil might win
I say dont allow
Words and actions of derranged
To take away your crown
Reign.

Copyright © kewter ... [ 2005-02-21 22:19:29]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:20:16 PM AEST
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another great write of yours.... maybe i'm seeing this poem in a different light than everyone else cause i think there should be a lot more comments on this poem... i loved the last few lines, in my less than expect opinion i'll have to ask, is this poem about being true to yourself and no one else, because thats what i saw in it... with the last few lines i got someone in power ready to relinquish his crown because of a few neighsayers who thinks his plans are wrong, but knowing that his plans are better for himself and everyone else he won't give it up.... and i'd say Reign would be a great title of this poem

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