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Array ( [sid] => 85250 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOVING YOU [time] => 2005-02-22 01:05:52 [hometext] => A special write for my wife [bodytext] =>



My life was wasting away untill
The day you came into my life

You brought me more than love
You brought me peace and hope

For a better tomorrow
A life of joy

You showed me that even with my diease
There can be a better today.
A better life

I wish i could show you with more than just words
I shall tell you I Love You everyday and always

May you know that this is true
There will be days that seem like i'm drifting away

But i'm not
This body feels old
But your love makes it new
You make me anew

I am Alive once more

My life i live for you
Always know that i will forever be here by your side

And from everyday that we shall spend
Form now till forever

May you read these words
And know the love
That i have for you shall always be

Shall always grow
Shall never fade away

You are my sweet
My greatest love

You are my wife
My angel that God has sent me from above

Never has one given show much to me
than what you have.

These words are just an expression of what i feel inside

They are just letters of words
In which can not speck

This is my heart
You are my heart

You are the greatest love that a man could ever have

That this man has ever knowen.
Thank you my love for giving me

The power

The strength
To carry on.

In life

Love Dennis


BY DENNIS LEMMEN

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LOVING YOU

Contributed by lemmen on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:05:52 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry







My life was wasting away untill
The day you came into my life

You brought me more than love
You brought me peace and hope

For a better tomorrow
A life of joy

You showed me that even with my diease
There can be a better today.
A better life

I wish i could show you with more than just words
I shall tell you I Love You everyday and always

May you know that this is true
There will be days that seem like i'm drifting away

But i'm not
This body feels old
But your love makes it new
You make me anew

I am Alive once more

My life i live for you
Always know that i will forever be here by your side

And from everyday that we shall spend
Form now till forever

May you read these words
And know the love
That i have for you shall always be

Shall always grow
Shall never fade away

You are my sweet
My greatest love

You are my wife
My angel that God has sent me from above

Never has one given show much to me
than what you have.

These words are just an expression of what i feel inside

They are just letters of words
In which can not speck

This is my heart
You are my heart

You are the greatest love that a man could ever have

That this man has ever knowen.
Thank you my love for giving me

The power

The strength
To carry on.

In life

Love Dennis


BY DENNIS LEMMEN





Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2005-02-22 01:05:52]
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Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:08:40 AM AEST
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Lovely piece :-)


Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by mypetmeatball on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:22:18 AM AEST
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Thought is nice, style of writing is nice.


Word choice is a bit cliche. Rework the poem and make the language represent you. Some lines seem like they could be out of a greeting card.


This is constructive criticism, I see good things coming from this, just make it more personal...good luck


Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyWynter on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:42:19 AM AEST
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I thought this piece was very loving, full of sentiment and emotion. It is always nice to see when someone has that special person in their life that they can share such a true bond with.


Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:08:27 PM AEST
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loving and sentimental Dennis, loved this
pix xx


Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:20:38 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful.. I felt love and compassion and most of all friendship. This was a really beautiful poem dennis!! Keep writing, never give up!

Blessed be
christina


Re: LOVING YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:43:23 AM AEST
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW, that is so sweet!!!!! Perfect write!! 5 stars!!

Keep it up!! Write of love, not :)





Love,
-xXRayeXx




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