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Trying to put right all that I did wrong,
We are standing tall against the tide,
Not giving in, not running to hide.

I have let everything beat me,
I am tired of not feeling free,
I pushed you away I know I hurt you,
But I promise to stick by your side like glue.

It’ll be hard not to let depression win,
As it has wore my strength so thin,
You have supported me from the word go,
I love you for that I just thought you should know.

I don’t have to be alone you are here,
To fight horrors off as they come near,
We must work together, stay as one,
As without you my love living would be no fun.

Hold my hand help me to walk again,
I will battle with my on-going pain,
That I feel inside my soul & my heart,
This is our new beginning our brand new start.

With you I want to grow old & grey,
Always by your side is where I want to stay,
Waking up next to you seeing your smiling face,
Is something from my life I never want to erase.

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Trying To Stay Strong

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:05:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I’m trying to stay strong,
Trying to put right all that I did wrong,
We are standing tall against the tide,
Not giving in, not running to hide.

I have let everything beat me,
I am tired of not feeling free,
I pushed you away I know I hurt you,
But I promise to stick by your side like glue.

It’ll be hard not to let depression win,
As it has wore my strength so thin,
You have supported me from the word go,
I love you for that I just thought you should know.

I don’t have to be alone you are here,
To fight horrors off as they come near,
We must work together, stay as one,
As without you my love living would be no fun.

Hold my hand help me to walk again,
I will battle with my on-going pain,
That I feel inside my soul & my heart,
This is our new beginning our brand new start.

With you I want to grow old & grey,
Always by your side is where I want to stay,
Waking up next to you seeing your smiling face,
Is something from my life I never want to erase.





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Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by Onslaught on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:14:23 PM AEST
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"With you I want to grow old & grey,
Always by your side is where I want to stay,
Waking up next to you seeing your smiling face,
Is something from my life I never want to erase."

That sure sounds good to me as well. Great write. I look forward to finding someone special, such as that as which you speak, that I can live and enjoy life with. Take care, stay strong


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by Rae on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:27:54 PM AEST
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aww.. that last stanza's my favorite too. :) great write, my friend.


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:29:06 PM AEST
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another beautiful write Pixie ... hold on ... but work together ... that is the key. You each have to help the other to find their strengths.

Nazzy ~


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 02:21:45 PM AEST
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Such a sweet sentiment, and well written too. Nice.


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 04:08:07 PM AEST
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Welcome back Krisse.
Very strong write, we are here for you....


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 04:35:38 PM AEST
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Gosh Pixie..I just couldnt read this and not comment. I can so identify with this right now. Have been reading your poetry just not commenting. I hope all is well with you and yours.
Hugs and love
Jenni


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 06:32:13 PM AEST
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such longing in your heart give rise 2 the beauty that posess this poem, it can't help but cry 2 all, hear my plea, lovely peice of
writting pixie . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 08:50:55 PM AEST
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Good work pixie. Nice flow and the descriptive words ensured this reader understood the serious of wanting to be Believed. I like the ending how it as iF the norm is to refer to old and grey when all these wonderful memeries matter the most.
Nice write.

Whisper


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by Les4567 on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 09:23:53 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this poem pixie
it is so sweet and so heartfelt
your flow was great
You good descrittive words
welll done
~Leslie


Re: Trying To Stay Strong (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 07:56:59 AM AEST
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Emotive, you do know how to make us feel your emotions.

nice write as always Kriss.

Jane ^_^




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