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Array ( [sid] => 85357 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Self Proclaimed Failure [time] => 2005-02-22 21:49:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Blood seeping out
No way to regress
Cut and never shout
All because you were
Depressed

Blood covered you
Always misunderstood
Now you're turning blue
All because of a broken
Childhood

Blood drying now
A new scar soon
Cutting again somehow
All because of broken emotions of
Doom
...
The cutting was'nt enough
You needed something else too
You told everybody,and they thought you were a bluff
Now you're stung up high, totally blue
...
The noose so tight on the night you died
...
In the morning your mother was screaming, "Why"!
As you hung there,
Glaring at your glazed over eyes
...
Too bad you
Ended your cry.
Without a suicide note
To even mention why.
Now your feet float,
Succeeding in hanging yourself
Because the cutting was'nt getting it done
And you were tired of trying to
Lie.
...
Your mother slit her wrists the next night.
Another self proclaimed failure,
...
Succeeding to die. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 13 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Self Proclaimed Failure

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 09:49:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Blood seeping out
No way to regress
Cut and never shout
All because you were
Depressed

Blood covered you
Always misunderstood
Now you're turning blue
All because of a broken
Childhood

Blood drying now
A new scar soon
Cutting again somehow
All because of broken emotions of
Doom
...
The cutting was'nt enough
You needed something else too
You told everybody,and they thought you were a bluff
Now you're stung up high, totally blue
...
The noose so tight on the night you died
...
In the morning your mother was screaming, "Why"!
As you hung there,
Glaring at your glazed over eyes
...
Too bad you
Ended your cry.
Without a suicide note
To even mention why.
Now your feet float,
Succeeding in hanging yourself
Because the cutting was'nt getting it done
And you were tired of trying to
Lie.
...
Your mother slit her wrists the next night.
Another self proclaimed failure,
...
Succeeding to die.

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-22 21:49:22]
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Re: Self Proclaimed Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:04:34 PM AEST
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thank your for making me teary eyed...

Re: Self Proclaimed Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:06:58 PM AEST
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Brilliant! a bit scary, and rather depressing, but I'm used to that. great job!

Re: Self Proclaimed Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by Baig on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 10:29:20 PM AEST
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I didn't get teary eyed, but I liked it.

Re: Self Proclaimed Failure (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:36:06 AM AEST
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Outstanding Clark. Absolutely outstanding. This was excellent. I can sit here for hours but no amount of words will describe it. This was just... great job Clark. Really.

--amanda--

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