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Array ( [sid] => 85608 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Missing you [time] => 2005-02-24 17:42:45 [hometext] => My bestfriend Brittany has moved far away and i miss her soo much this poem is dedicated to her please tell me what you think of it. [bodytext] =>
When you told me you were moving in a couple of months my heart sank,
Then we started hanging out more often making sure to make up for times that later in life would never be the same.
We hung out like old times and chatted for hours ,
we spent hours giggling and chatting bout boys....

Then you mentioned that your family is moving sooner then they thought.
You told me that it was killing you , that every night in your bed your smiles formed into cries for all those great memories we've had, that now would never be the same.

I cried for hours every night just wishing your parents would change their minds....
I thought we might see eachother all the time ....i mean North carolina isnt too far away...
Then again, apparently thats not the case.

Since that night before u moved, in which i spent the night so i could say goodbye,
You were crying on my shoulder and i was trying to dry my eyes...
it was painful when you left.....
especially since i for got to tell you how great you were as a friend...

weve talked a few times since them, like once or twice on the phone and online.....
but i just wish we could bring back old times.....
we havent seen eachother since that night 2 years ago, its dread ful not knowing you anymore, like i use to.

Please never forget me though, who knows, keep your hopes high and maybe ill be able to visit soon...
Is just tough .....without thinking bout you during events in school ...and hang outs with other friends of mine....
its just hard for me without you, im truly missing you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 214 [topic] => 52 [informant] => poetrygirl1991 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Missing you

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 05:42:45 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry




When you told me you were moving in a couple of months my heart sank,
Then we started hanging out more often making sure to make up for times that later in life would never be the same.
We hung out like old times and chatted for hours ,
we spent hours giggling and chatting bout boys....

Then you mentioned that your family is moving sooner then they thought.
You told me that it was killing you , that every night in your bed your smiles formed into cries for all those great memories we've had, that now would never be the same.

I cried for hours every night just wishing your parents would change their minds....
I thought we might see eachother all the time ....i mean North carolina isnt too far away...
Then again, apparently thats not the case.

Since that night before u moved, in which i spent the night so i could say goodbye,
You were crying on my shoulder and i was trying to dry my eyes...
it was painful when you left.....
especially since i for got to tell you how great you were as a friend...

weve talked a few times since them, like once or twice on the phone and online.....
but i just wish we could bring back old times.....
we havent seen eachother since that night 2 years ago, its dread ful not knowing you anymore, like i use to.

Please never forget me though, who knows, keep your hopes high and maybe ill be able to visit soon...
Is just tough .....without thinking bout you during events in school ...and hang outs with other friends of mine....
its just hard for me without you, im truly missing you.




Copyright © poetrygirl1991 ... [ 2005-02-24 17:42:45]
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Re: Missing you (User Rating: 1 )
by bibi on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 06:45:43 PM AEST
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friends are forever no matter how far away nor how much time passes by. i'm sure your friend feels the same way too. good write


Re: Missing you (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 11:25:02 PM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE YOU MAKE A PRETTY GOOD FRIEND! HOW CARING YOU ARE TO POUR OUT YOUR HEART LIKE THAT!! IT SUCKS WHEN YOUR FRIENDS MOVE,IT HAPPEN TO ME ABOUT FIVE YEARS AGO!!! I TRACK HIM DOWN & NOW ABOUT 3 TIMES A YEAR WE VISIT EACHOTHER & TALK ABOUT THE OLD TIMES!!!! VERY PRETTY POEM & I WISH YOU & YOUR FRIEND MANY YEARS OF HAPPINESS TO COME!!!!!

DAN!!!!!!




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