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Array ( [sid] => 85625 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Pain is My Love [time] => 2005-02-24 19:49:07 [hometext] => Cast me aside....... I think not! [bodytext] => -----------________------------------

My love is to watch you struggle
Seeing you fall; as your life you try and juggle
What sweet sounds to see all the irony
You ask for my sympathy, I give you tragedy

I wish at night I could dive into your soul
Just so I can feel your body turn cold
I smother your pain with more heartache
You tried to hurt me and that was your worst mistake

I will not let you walk in peace
My blood boils black and will never cease
I gave you everything I never had
You left in the dark and wonder why I am mad

You used me for your own abuse
Now your done and think you can just cut me loose
I will rival in the pain of your demise
Look at me now, cause I will be the last vision in your eyes

Your cold inside, and I am sensing fear
Your self-control will slowly disappear
Remember that I will always be stuck in your head
Crushing your world until they pronounce your heart dead.

Don’t push your ignorance on me
I see you have rehearsed your sick jealousy
Now you know how it feels to be lost inside
I am so in love with it, at this moment I could die!
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Your Pain is My Love

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:49:07 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



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My love is to watch you struggle
Seeing you fall; as your life you try and juggle
What sweet sounds to see all the irony
You ask for my sympathy, I give you tragedy

I wish at night I could dive into your soul
Just so I can feel your body turn cold
I smother your pain with more heartache
You tried to hurt me and that was your worst mistake

I will not let you walk in peace
My blood boils black and will never cease
I gave you everything I never had
You left in the dark and wonder why I am mad

You used me for your own abuse
Now your done and think you can just cut me loose
I will rival in the pain of your demise
Look at me now, cause I will be the last vision in your eyes

Your cold inside, and I am sensing fear
Your self-control will slowly disappear
Remember that I will always be stuck in your head
Crushing your world until they pronounce your heart dead.

Don’t push your ignorance on me
I see you have rehearsed your sick jealousy
Now you know how it feels to be lost inside
I am so in love with it, at this moment I could die!




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-02-24 19:49:07]
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Re: Your Pain is My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Moonglow on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:52:09 PM AEST
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So powerful, and bleak. I like bleak poetry. You know what **** who ever made you feel this way! But I really liked it anyway. 8)


Re: Your Pain is My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:52:50 PM AEST
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this is a great write...you are really talented....i will be honest...it is a little disturbing...but i love it!!!! ;)


Re: Your Pain is My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:56:33 PM AEST
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Thank you both for your comments. I made this for an ex that decided to try and come back around. Funny how they think you will just jump at the drop of a hat.


Re: Your Pain is My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by MajesticPoet on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:57:04 PM AEST
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Thank you both for your comments. I made this for an ex that decided to try and come back around. Funny how they think you will just jump at the drop of a hat.


Re: Your Pain is My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by apcfan on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 10:05:33 PM AEST
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I loved it. very powerful and dark. great write

Brandi




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