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Summon a thought
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 09:28:26 PM in AEST
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Summon a thought and let it bring you peace
In your soul burns the fire of heaven
Which warms the angels and infuriates those long deceased
From your trench you can surely see
The beauty in yourself grows
Even if youre the only one who knows
Let a thought push you along
The open sky or dream
Let the ocean sink you fast
Gasping for dirty air in between
And as you choke take a bow
For them then, later, and now
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2005-02-24 21:28:26]
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Re: Summon a thought
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:59:43 PM AEST
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I love the simplicity of this one jyss...Your expression is wonderful in this piece, and the imagery is vivid right from the first line...Writing is something you were definitely destined to do my friend...this is very good.
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