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Array ( [sid] => 85701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Did Not See [time] => 2005-02-25 13:09:38 [hometext] => you didn't see the pain and the tears, you left me alone... [bodytext] => All my tears you did not see,
You never saw the state of me,
After you walked out of my life,
It’d hurt less if you’d stuck in a knife.

I wept far into the night,
You weren’t there you had no sight,
I was alone in a world of blue tears,
Battling by myself with hurt, pain & fears.

I rang your phone but you ignored,
That drove devastation into my cores,
I pictured you lay with another,
No longer was I your best friend & lover.

I thought you’d gone & you’d never come back,
So in my nightmare I faded to black,
I had no willing or wanting to go on living,
I thought your heart would be more forgiving.

I never realised how much damage I had done,
As my demons were having too much fun,
They destroyed my love then left me alone,
I hurt my love when you wouldn’t answer your phone.

I thought that was really it for you & I,
All I could do was sit there & cry,
Memories were painful but in they did flood,
Ripping at my heart as I knew they would.

Everything reminded me of us,
Memories wouldn’t settle into the dust,
They kept on going around & around,
Then they just dropped me to die on the ground.
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You Did Not See

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:09:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

All my tears you did not see,
You never saw the state of me,
After you walked out of my life,
It’d hurt less if you’d stuck in a knife.

I wept far into the night,
You weren’t there you had no sight,
I was alone in a world of blue tears,
Battling by myself with hurt, pain & fears.

I rang your phone but you ignored,
That drove devastation into my cores,
I pictured you lay with another,
No longer was I your best friend & lover.

I thought you’d gone & you’d never come back,
So in my nightmare I faded to black,
I had no willing or wanting to go on living,
I thought your heart would be more forgiving.

I never realised how much damage I had done,
As my demons were having too much fun,
They destroyed my love then left me alone,
I hurt my love when you wouldn’t answer your phone.

I thought that was really it for you & I,
All I could do was sit there & cry,
Memories were painful but in they did flood,
Ripping at my heart as I knew they would.

Everything reminded me of us,
Memories wouldn’t settle into the dust,
They kept on going around & around,
Then they just dropped me to die on the ground.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-25 13:09:38]
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Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:35:26 PM AEST
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Just too sad. I think we have all had someone do us this way. It's great that you can write about it.
Dusty~

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 02:55:44 PM AEST
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you are soooo good at this type of poem.

Good poets have truley suffered in the past and come out the other side.

your work reflects this.

Excellent.

johnny

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:18:53 PM AEST
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Awwww hun...this is so sad it breaks my heart.

You do do some fabulous writing when you are down, too. But I really wish you could be happy.

*huggies* Phil xxx

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 06:55:21 PM AEST
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awwww krisse..sad write write, but oh so well done!

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 09:26:21 PM AEST
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as always straight from the heart pix, sad but beautiful . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:16:08 AM AEST
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sad...yet so beautiful...

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:13:31 PM AEST
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I liked your poem because most of us can relate to what you feel. A bit lengthy, but it didn't take away from the concept.

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:01:09 PM AEST
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This is so sad, but so well written as always...
Pixie, your talent shines thru all your writes...happy or sad...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: You Did Not See (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 03:28:49 PM AEST
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This one reminds me of something...ohhh yeah it was what i felt when you know who left i do feel this sometimes.

Ok before i mumble like a mad woman that i am, id just like to tell you Krissie that you one heck of an amazing poet and you do make me feel everything you write which makes you a great writer.

Good poem hun.

Hugs,
Jane ^_^
(Who just over rambled at her comment)

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