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Into darkness
Ever deeper
Clinging, desperate
To my dreams, as
One by one they slipped away

Falling farther into nothing
Hope long faded
Lost and lonely
Silent, crying
Crimson tears flowed
Down my cheeks, a dying rain

Then all at once you found me
In my darkness
You called to me
Reached your hand out
Brushed the tears off
With your love erased my pain

Now once again I'm falling
So completely
Out of darkness
Into your arms
Ever open
Where it's safe to dream again
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Falling

Contributed by LadyWynter on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:12:14 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Forever I was falling
Into darkness
Ever deeper
Clinging, desperate
To my dreams, as
One by one they slipped away

Falling farther into nothing
Hope long faded
Lost and lonely
Silent, crying
Crimson tears flowed
Down my cheeks, a dying rain

Then all at once you found me
In my darkness
You called to me
Reached your hand out
Brushed the tears off
With your love erased my pain

Now once again I'm falling
So completely
Out of darkness
Into your arms
Ever open
Where it's safe to dream again

Copyright © LadyWynter ... [ 2005-02-25 19:12:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:18:43 PM AEST
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What a wonderful feeling! I loved the way you reached the sentiment.
~Dusty~

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Jezabel on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 07:19:17 PM AEST
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lucky are you, luv. hope you never return to dark. no hope for me tho. good luv

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:51:12 PM AEST
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That last line ... yeah ... I like that. I like the whole feel and layout. I know how this feels too so it reaches me on a personal level too.

Nazzy ~

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 09:11:16 PM AEST
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an exquizit peice of romanc e2 grace these pages lovely write . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 10:11:53 PM AEST
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I love this! Each stanza flowed right into the next. It was very beautifully written.

Take care ~Stellar

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:36:13 AM AEST
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Wow this is so beautiful!

Scott

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:05:37 AM AEST
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very well written poem, keep up the good work
pix xx

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:34:28 AM AEST
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That gave me an unexpected chill.
It's a cliche but..it's simplicity was beautiful.
4 out of 5 *s

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisterchaser on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 11:00:25 PM AEST
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I'm glad you have been lifted , and can trust again.

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:45:28 AM AEST
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Gosh, this gets me. I'm with Jarred and Nazzy --- that last line is potent. On a purely personal level... it just tears me up.

Beautifully expressed! There is a lovely transition in this piece... you've obviously found what so many seek.

Still... trying to find a way to dream again,
~Snemmy~

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:15:12 PM AEST
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Wow!
This is wonderful, there is so much emotion in this and you make the words almost run together, as if they are meant to be together. The flow is just perfect.

Gorgeous poem my friend,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Falling (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd May 2014 @ 02:02:20 PM AEST
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beautifully written with great style and flow,

hugs n' love nessa

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