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Array ( [sid] => 85734 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''stole'' [time] => 2005-02-25 20:28:53 [hometext] => i lost my baby sister, whitny.. this is for her [bodytext] => As I watched you pass slowly
Tears streaming down my face
And you left us
With only a thumbprint on my heart
Where you had touched it, and your love grew
Like a wild rose, streaming through bare fields, when all hope was lost.
You showed your face, and made me smile
I did some pretty stupid stuff
Like when I was sick
And I broke your arm by throwing that table
But you just looked over it
As if it was nothing
And hugged me everyday
Even though I was scared to touch you
But you touched me anyway
And it felt so right
Being with you
Even though when I got mad, you ran from the room crying
You were my baby sister
And I loved you so much
You even looked up to me, as a parent figure
Cause’ dad left us when you were just born
And you never knew him
And Rupert passed, and it was like you had lost a father
You did not shed a tear though
You were so brave
You were only two
You knew what happened
Even though we told you he was just on vacation
But you did what you could
You hugged us everyday, and you loosened that pain
And we all thank you for that
But most of all
I want to thank you for being my sister
And I wanted to tell you goodbye for the last time
So here it goes,
Yours truly.
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''stole''

Contributed by english-pea-pelter on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:28:53 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



As I watched you pass slowly
Tears streaming down my face
And you left us
With only a thumbprint on my heart
Where you had touched it, and your love grew
Like a wild rose, streaming through bare fields, when all hope was lost.
You showed your face, and made me smile
I did some pretty stupid stuff
Like when I was sick
And I broke your arm by throwing that table
But you just looked over it
As if it was nothing
And hugged me everyday
Even though I was scared to touch you
But you touched me anyway
And it felt so right
Being with you
Even though when I got mad, you ran from the room crying
You were my baby sister
And I loved you so much
You even looked up to me, as a parent figure
Cause’ dad left us when you were just born
And you never knew him
And Rupert passed, and it was like you had lost a father
You did not shed a tear though
You were so brave
You were only two
You knew what happened
Even though we told you he was just on vacation
But you did what you could
You hugged us everyday, and you loosened that pain
And we all thank you for that
But most of all
I want to thank you for being my sister
And I wanted to tell you goodbye for the last time
So here it goes,
Yours truly.




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Re: ''stole'' (User Rating: 1 )
by mia on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:37:02 PM AEST
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This poem touches me, its so nice in many ways. i love it i really do. I know what its like to loose someone so close to me. wish you all the best, i really do


Re: ''stole'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:46:15 PM AEST
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This is really a precious gift for your sister. I loved it.

Take care~ Stellar


Re: ''stole'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:58:05 PM AEST
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My heart goes out to you. While this poem was very sad, I sensed a strength in you. I read no bitterness nor depression. I admire you for that. I fully understand how it feels to lose someone all to early. A good write. Keep it up.


Re: ''stole'' (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:41:06 AM AEST
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WOW,i'm sorry for ur lost,i read some of the info about u and it sounds like u've had a pretty rough life.i'm sorry even though i dont know you,but the way u explained everything touched a place in my heart and i hope 1 day soon all ur troubles disapear,all though its not easy,good luck to u and ur family for future life,and dont ever stop writing.

savedbydeath


Re: ''stole'' (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:26:24 PM AEST
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I am so sorry to hear anout your sister...my heart is aching for you but keep writing as those feeelings of yours can shine through even at this awkward time in your life...
Enormous write english -pea- pelter!


Re: ''stole'' (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_noel09 on Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 06:20:43 PM AEST
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hey i just want you to know that i'm sure whitney is looking down on you and saying how proud she is of you! love ya buddy
emms




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