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Array ( [sid] => 85785 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Waiting Forever [time] => 2005-02-26 05:03:55 [hometext] => I don't belong, but I wish I did [bodytext] => There's a shadow of me on the wall

It's asking if I know who I am today

It doesn't look like me at all

It just seems to be pushing me away

I'm a bird who just can't seem to land

Losing his balance in the sky

And it's something that I cannot understand

But no one can answer my "why?"

I'd give my life to feel a meaning

I'd give up my time to fit in

I'd sit and wait forever

Just to feel loved again

Just to feel loved again

Just to feel loved again

I'd drop to my knees to feel loved again

And bleed to show that I care

An outcast on a deserted road

Is something no God can repair

I'd sit and wait forever

Just to feel loved again [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Drop-of-Red [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Waiting Forever

Contributed by Drop-of-Red on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 05:03:55 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



There's a shadow of me on the wall

It's asking if I know who I am today

It doesn't look like me at all

It just seems to be pushing me away

I'm a bird who just can't seem to land

Losing his balance in the sky

And it's something that I cannot understand

But no one can answer my "why?"

I'd give my life to feel a meaning

I'd give up my time to fit in

I'd sit and wait forever

Just to feel loved again

Just to feel loved again

Just to feel loved again

I'd drop to my knees to feel loved again

And bleed to show that I care

An outcast on a deserted road

Is something no God can repair

I'd sit and wait forever

Just to feel loved again




Copyright © Drop-of-Red ... [ 2005-02-26 05:03:55]
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Re: Waiting Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:48:50 PM AEST
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aww...this a very sad and beautiful poem...u'll be loved...in more ways than one


Re: Waiting Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 02:07:29 PM AEST
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you need not space every single line. your last bit was intriguing. what a life waiting...what a waste for something that might not even come. love yourself, so you dont waste your entire life for it.


Re: Waiting Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Concrete_Rose on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:58:37 AM AEST
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I loved this poem, u seem very talented, this poem is realistic, so i hate it when ppl make comments like, " you should feel good about urself and blah blah blah, poems aren't suppose to always express happpiness they express whats real and how u really FEEl.....you should read my poem Mirror, Mirror and tell me what u think, its not to inspire n-e-one, but to let them know how it is in the real WORLD....


Re: Waiting Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by girltranscended on Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 11:58:24 PM AEST
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again a very emotional and powerful write, especially the end. Bravo :)




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