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Array ( [sid] => 85804 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Fifth Ocean [time] => 2005-02-26 12:59:32 [hometext] => This poem is for my Jacob as well. Enjoy. [bodytext] => The time we spend together,
Even if it’s minutes long,
Is sweet enough to be published,
Or sung just like a song.

And even right after you leave me,
As quickly as you came.
The vision of you, still real in my eyes,
Is beautiful just the same.

The deepness of your eyes,
Catches all my attention first.
Their beauty and their depth,
Create the fifth ocean on Earth.

Every time you look at me,
It’s a memory my heart saves.
It’s a color that breaks over me,
In the form of soft waves.

The fifth ocean is the warmest,
With a sunset of it’s own.
Easy and shining, my time in your eyes,
Kills off my being alone.

With every single glance,
I go swimming in the sea.
The feeling much invaluable,
When your waves hold on to me. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => JacobsKK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 55 [ratings] => 11 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Fifth Ocean

Contributed by JacobsKK on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 12:59:32 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The time we spend together,
Even if it’s minutes long,
Is sweet enough to be published,
Or sung just like a song.

And even right after you leave me,
As quickly as you came.
The vision of you, still real in my eyes,
Is beautiful just the same.

The deepness of your eyes,
Catches all my attention first.
Their beauty and their depth,
Create the fifth ocean on Earth.

Every time you look at me,
It’s a memory my heart saves.
It’s a color that breaks over me,
In the form of soft waves.

The fifth ocean is the warmest,
With a sunset of it’s own.
Easy and shining, my time in your eyes,
Kills off my being alone.

With every single glance,
I go swimming in the sea.
The feeling much invaluable,
When your waves hold on to me.

Copyright Â© JacobsKK ... [ 2005-02-26 12:59:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Fifth Ocean (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:11:06 PM AEST
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awww that was so sad and emotional, good flow and expression,
pix xx

Re: The Fifth Ocean (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 01:43:32 PM AEST
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this was very nice indeed. i like the originality mostly.

Re: The Fifth Ocean (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 08:38:45 PM AEST
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beautiful write, very original and again beautifuly written.

Re: The Fifth Ocean (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 12:36:22 AM AEST
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Really beautiful!!
Jacob is a lucky guy...
Jenni

Re: The Fifth Ocean (User Rating: 1 )
by NoHoldingBack on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 11:02:34 AM AEST
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Okay, so this one says you are imaginative. Another piece of your personality has been revealed through this magnificent piece of writing. It maked me want to meet you and this boy you speak of. Great write, really.

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