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Array ( [sid] => 85857 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bless [time] => 2005-02-26 21:09:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'd try not to think of you
But I could'nt for the life of me
Because without you, I would be
Just a shadow...All shades of blue
That nobody would see

I'd try not to dream of you
But I do not control my mind
It's you, the one I call mine
Without you, I would'nt know what to do
My eyes would dim, I'd go blind

I'd try not to be near you
But my legs and arms would act without my knowledge
Walking to such a beautiful image
And once again I'd talking to you
As I need no courage

I'd try not to see you
But that would hurt my eyes
Someone that will never hear a forever goodbye
If you did'nt already have a clue
Without you I'd probably die

I'd try not to love you
But I would kill myself in the process
Without you I'd once again regress
I love you
My once in a lifetime
Bless [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Bless

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 09:09:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I'd try not to think of you
But I could'nt for the life of me
Because without you, I would be
Just a shadow...All shades of blue
That nobody would see

I'd try not to dream of you
But I do not control my mind
It's you, the one I call mine
Without you, I would'nt know what to do
My eyes would dim, I'd go blind

I'd try not to be near you
But my legs and arms would act without my knowledge
Walking to such a beautiful image
And once again I'd talking to you
As I need no courage

I'd try not to see you
But that would hurt my eyes
Someone that will never hear a forever goodbye
If you did'nt already have a clue
Without you I'd probably die

I'd try not to love you
But I would kill myself in the process
Without you I'd once again regress
I love you
My once in a lifetime
Bless

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-02-26 21:09:08]
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Re: Bless (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 12:05:02 AM AEST
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never estimate. interesting ending. wasnt expecting that, and i wasnt exactly expecting this to be written this way either. just add to change your formatting, eh? =]

Re: Bless (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 07:10:06 PM AEST
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Great poem clark.
I love you

Love you
Amber

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